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MyCrimsonDawn
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abuseI find it's really hard to find any actual stories that have been written well, let alone specific couple stories like Marco/Dylan, let alone stories with happy endings I approve of. But you did and I liked this so you should feel special.
aspirer
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuseyay :) darco forever. i loved this.
Shiakuu Hitome
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseCute. Very cute. I just read all seven chapters of The Reason, and I have to say, I like the little happiness break thing...
Staargirly
2004-10-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was lovely. I loved all the little moments you chose. Each one was random, but perfect which is what made it so good to read. Nobody else would have thought of the things you chose to write about. Gold star for you!
Blood Angel
2004-10-15
ch 1,
abuseAw! That was so cute! At first I thought Marco and Dylan had split...it made me sad:( But then up pops Marco and it was all better. I really liked this, definatly a fav
sevhevcracksmeup
2004-09-01
ch 1,
abuseVery good. I really like each individual memory that you used. It developed his personality furthur while also developing the personalities of those around him (Marco and Paige).
meravigliata
2004-08-30
ch 1,
abuseAhh, love this. I love this.

That's all I have to say!
laffertyluver23
2004-08-28
ch 1,
abusethat was cute! I thought it would have been sad, but it wasn't. Very good!
anjel919
2004-08-27
ch 1,
abuseToo sweet and so true. Great job.
Bunny Wabbit
2004-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, cute. Great job.
R
2004-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was really good! :)
Slow Dancing In A Burning R...
2004-08-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was so cute! I loved it. The whole entire thing. And Dylan going to college is going to be major sadness.
Diane LD
2004-08-26
ch 1,
abuse*sighs*

That was really pretty. I hope you write some more like these. And update The Reason, as well! Great job!
StorytellerD
2004-08-26
ch 1,
abuseThis was very interesting. I liked that you included BOTH happy and not-so-happy memories. You're a good writer!
Kaitlinbell
2004-08-26
ch 1,
abuseMay I marry you?
No really. That was perfect. In every sense of the word. You chose the most mundane everyday happenings and showed their relationship's progress through them. And I bow to you. I especially liked the mention of Paige and the crying. So many seem to forget about her.
And I really liked the sleeping bag races down the stairs. I was grinning like an idiot through that entire part. Seems like something they would both do. Thank you so much for writing this. Made me all fuzzy and happy like.
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