GREAT!
loved it a LOT!
a very nice fic

Great finish! Thanks for finishing up, and I'm sorry about the delay in reviews.

i hate to lurk so i'm just reviewing to say i have got up to the 3rd part, yet i'm afraid the story isn't holding my interests. i'll stop reading HalfLife, always a chance i'll come across it again.

Beautiful story. You nearly made me cry.
Much Love,
Santiva Potter

AH! JACK! y? y must jacks dad b so cruel?!?!?!?!?!?!??! im comin Jack. hold on!

great writing though, im on the edge of my chair.

funny he's not strong enough. well he sure is now he's the greatest pitate ever! i love Bootstrap 4 savin jack. but jacks dad was a jerk and a meanie and well a monster.

Ah! Jack. no! And ana too. Gr strange cloaked man. you'll pay!

I read the entire story and I must say you did an excellent job! I was worried about Ana being dead at first, but I'm glad it all came out to a happy conclusion.

THat a great story you have here! May be not so romantic, as I expected, but still very extreme.

-sob- Ana's DEAD!?!?

Yea! Ye didn't kill Jack! Woot! ^^

cool

Oh, nice ending - very sweet. Good job, I hope to see more work from you soon.
Keep at it:).
p.s. - nicely done!

but no one had expected the pirate captain to stay asleep for days after the fact
- me included, I wonder if he's ashamed that he killed his father even though the man was a sadistic, stupid, fuck-mook bastard. Blood's stil blood though, eh?
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yay! and now off to your homepage tocheck and see if I missed any other updates, which I probably have. lol. c ya

Again with that line? the other one HAD to have been a dream, a nightmare of the worst kind...
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Well at least they're trying to soften the blow with rum, smart crew.
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WHOO! AND ANA'S ALIVE! YAYAY!
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They drugged him?! EEK! And they wonder if he'll be mad, naturally he'll be enraged. How dare they, thats just flat out rude
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Ana seems fine enough if she's moving, crouching on the floor, and all. That's good news, now Jack wont have to worry so much and be so guilt-ridden
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And the last chapter of the story's next, *sniff sniff* its been an amazing story thusfar, all of yours are though. lol