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Miss.t
2008-08-20 . chapter 13
wow! this is the sweetest fanfic iv ever read u r a gr8 writer and i hope u write more stories in the future! maybe about vikis kits?
madicullen
2008-06-10 . chapter 13
great great great story! Wow! its definately believable and its freaking long! I mean, i had to print out the last three chapters cuz i couldnt read em on the comp and they were like fourteen a peice! REally good tho!
madicullen
2008-06-08 . chapter 8
good so far. I am being kicked off the computer or i'd keep reading. The only thing i notice is that u switch tense sometimes. U dont really need to edit if u dont want. it doesnt affect the overall effect of the story. I will continue tomorrow!
-madicullen
Misto4Ever
2007-11-06 . chapter 13
I absolutely loved your story.It was the best cats the musical fanfiction I have ever read and if you have any other story about Cats or anything else I would love to read it!
tales123
2007-06-06 . chapter 13
*sniff* So beautiful. YES! Finally, my favorite couple have kittens!
Medilia
2006-10-13 . chapter 13
sweet story i loved it. keep up ur good writing
Medilia
2006-10-13 . chapter 10
nice story so far. you ised my name! my name is Melanie ohh i feel special. any way great story
Katrina
2005-02-26 . chapter 13
Simply adorable. I loved it! =D
Dancing By Myself
2005-01-10 . chapter 13
This is beautiful story! Beautiful beautiful beautiful. It's a gem.

Your characters were very well described. I could picture them perfectly!

You rock!
litakino22
2004-12-27 . chapter 13
aw! but i wanted to know what happens to the kittens! oh well... don't get me wrong, it was an awesome story
Attila the Conqueror
2004-11-25 . chapter 12
Aw, that was a heart-melting chapter. Was it the end? I hope not, although there really isn't much left to explain in this story, until the Jellicle Ball comes and they declare themselves mates. That would be cool. This is such a great story, and I really do hope you continue with it.
litakino22
2004-11-20 . chapter 11
oh, please finish this story, this is really great! Victoria is one of my favorites, I need to know what happens!
Mystitat
2004-11-01 . chapter 11
Yay! It's updated!
Oh, man, this one really brings a tear to my eye. ::sniff:: MISTO! I get choked up just reading this. Very powerful story. Keep it up!
Attila the Conqueror
2004-10-31 . chapter 11
Aww, you killed off my favorite character. Yes, Macavity. After all, every story needs an evil and maniacle villain to truly be good. And your story is beyond perfection. I don't know if your planning another chapter, but this seems to be a great place to end the story. I would prefer another chapter, like an epilogue or something. Maybe Vikki w/ Misto's son/daughter. That would be pretty cool. But hey, whatever floats your yacht.
Attila the Conqueror
2004-10-22 . chapter 10
wow! that's a great, no, AWESOME story!! The characters are deep, the story line is solid, and I can see vividly what is happening thanks to your wonderful descriptions. But, this review thingy says I should make comments that will improve your writing. There are two minor things: one, some of the tenses are wrong, you use "has" where you should use "had." Two, it seems that you were typing this rather quickly, and left out words. Minor things that can easily be fixed by simply slowing down a bit.
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