|Reviews for Soulless|
| Bryony Cel 9/4/04 . chapter 11
I can't believe it's over! I think you should write a sequel to it, another title and all, 'cause it's mostly like an ending and then you could do a new beginning. Can't wait for the next story/part whatever you decide. I know it'll be awsome, anything from you is amazing. Keep up the awsome work!
| cerebralgoddess21 9/4/04 . chapter 11
Very good, well written. I like seeing Vincent as a bit more softer then he was in the movie, but I think with the right woman (Victoria) [:-D] he can show more emotion other then anger. I like them together and I hope you either write another chapter or maybe a sequel? Having them go on some big adventure or say a past boyfriend comes back and tries to steal her away and Vincent gets super jealous and acts all protective like around her. I may be weird, but I think that'd be cute. Great story. I enjoyed reading it.
| par 9/4/04 . chapter 10
Wha? One more chapter? No! I want 50 more chapters! LOL, ok I don't want you to be too exhausted, though, due to us demanding fans.
4 times seen Collateral? HA! I've seen it 25 times! ... ok, that's only because I bought the bootleg DVD for $5 on Santee Alley, so sue me. ;) But, I have seen it 3x in the theatre.
Chapters 9 and 10 were very satisfying. I began to question this puppy-buying business in the beginning of Ch 9, but as I continued reading, it made a lot of sense. And damn those cliffhangers! After having to endure 1 year after the Season 1 West Wing finale, I never want to suffer another cliffhanger again! LOL, but I've make an exception for this. And I'm glad you've raised the stakes for the climax of the story; most fan fic I see, writers seemingly forget to do this and the story just suddenly ends. And how the stakes have been raised! It's very impressive how you've managed to keep Vincent in character for so long, never straying off course. Excellent job.
And, oh when, oh when, will we discover the happenings of a certain triple-X, NC-17, passion filled night? LOL, I don't really expect to ever know, but every time it's referred to in the story, I quiver with frustration, because I'm outta the loop!
Can't wait for Ch 11!
| cerebralgoddess21 9/4/04 . chapter 10
no, not just one more chapter! I'm loving this. It's really good. I want Vincent to shoot Claudia and the Shakespear guy. Badly. *Evil laugh* I also want him with Victoria, okay, now that I've said what I want I'll let you do your thing on the last (dun dun dun *cries*) chapter. I've really enjoyed this story. You're a great writer.
| Warm Mittens 9/4/04 . chapter 10
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness...I'm officially putting my "outsanity" (haha...remember?) aside and telling u how I feel bout his chappy. Iam able to do this thanks to ur adive about the meds...oky doky.
Ok...I'm practicing my french for back to school so here it goes...(haha..like I know french)
J'adore votre chapitre. Vous êtes un auteur fantastique. Je parlent pas le français, mais je l'essaye. Svp mise à jour bientôt.
I adore this chapter. You are a fantastic author. I can't speak french, but I atempt it. Please update soon.
Hahaha...I so did not say the write things in french, and I really hope I didn't affend anybody who speaks french (big appolagy to my french teacher the failure)
Oky Dokey now I gotta go take my meds...AW SCREW IT THEY TASTE LIKE SHIT! I'll be alright.
Now let me explain to u wut I think of Claudia. At first wen she asked Victoria to follow her I thought see was nice, but then she confessed to killing her ex and now she is a total biotch and I want her dead. I love vincent for breaking her arm, leg, and taking her gun. And Victoria for breaking her nose and yah...all the stuff she did.
I want to do something to her to. *jumps into story and...pulls claudias hair* hehehe...yay I feel special.
hahahahahahaha hehehehehehe *runs into room once moor and the soem old thing happens...corner/rocking/mumbing to self*
(Random person) Alright I'm getting sick of this. THis is the last time I'm speaking on behalf of this insain freak. *sweet treats yell from room* "I'm OUTSAIN!" Shut up I'm talking u retard. *pouts* Now sweet treats wants to know wut a satchel is? And she would also like to say...*yells from room* "SAY IT...NOW!" *person takes deap breath* alright...Here is the prom she would like me to say ur your honor...
Once I saw upon a stair,
A little man that wasn't there,
He wasn't there again today,
Oh how I wish he'd go away.
*Hear clapping from room* Please update soon, so that crazy nut will come out of that damn room, and speak for herself.
| Bryony Cel 9/4/04 . chapter 10
Wow! Please please update soon, I need to find out what happens! Your'e getting really good at cliffhangers, damn it! And I'm SO glad that Vincent is actually listening, aw! Sorry for reviewing the last chapter so late. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
| Bryony Cel 9/4/04 . chapter 9
Okay, I'm sorry for not reviewing ealier, but my comp is on the blink and so I've been having trouble doing anything. Hopefully this will work. Awsome chapter, I can't believe you just left it like that! I need more! THe way that all of this turned around, was just so cool, I didn't expect it at all. And a little dog! Cutes thing EVER! Vincent was pretty nasty last chapter, but he's cool again. I'm amazed at how you haven't screwed up even once, and the Vincent is still so in character. Can't wait for more! I just hope my computer isn't still screwy then.
| GeminiQueen 9/3/04 . chapter 9
I love puppies! I wish I had one of my own. *sigh* I wonder what Vincent will think when he finds out the puppy's name is Max. After I saw the movie the first time, I was thinking of re-naming my cats to Vincent and Max, but my sisters freaked out and said no. Oh well. Maybe in the future I'll have an adorable puppy that I can name Max. Anyway, the story is going to have Vincent's POV right? O, that'll be interesting. Cant wait to read the next chapter!
| Warm Mittens 9/3/04 . chapter 9
Twelve hundred? umm...I"LL GIVE YOU A MILLION. Reaches into a random persons pocket. *gets mad cause he only has 25 cents* I hate u stupid poor broke ppl *runs home and into room (and starts?)...rocking back and forth in corner*
(Police man) I'm sorry but Sweet Treats has been put under house arrest for stealing and can do nothing but read ur stories all day so u better update.
(Sweet Treats thoughts) Wow that chapter was good. I want a puppy. A cute little puppy wuppy like Max so I can cuddle wuddle and be happy...
o...and Vincent...he was all toughy feely and aww...there so cute together and I think there in love. Wonder if they'll get married and have kida and live in a big house with a white pickit fence...oh well...better go check if spadesjade has UPDATED YET! (hint hint. nudge nudge)
(P.S about claudia. This is what I think...ClaudiaBITCH! hahahahaha)
| Warm Mittens 9/3/04 . chapter 8
oh...ah (every one say it with me now) oh...ah! hahaha WOW. That was alot to take in at one *holds head in pain* but I'd do it again anytime. hehe
VINCENT IS SO HOT WHEN HE"S ANGRY! I loved that whole mad,yell,anger,hatred part hahaha it was awsome. I loved how he shot at her. I wanna try *hold out gun and fires at dude on street* "AH!" *dude falls down dead. OPSY DASY!
*IMPORTANT* I notices something in this chapter. I noticed the reason why u called ur story 'soulless'. YAH GO ME! here it is:
"You're just a heartless, soulless killer."
Victoria said that and know I think ur title name is perfect. SOULLESS! SOULLES! hahahahhaha *runs back into and rocks back and forth in corner...once again*
(random dude) I'm sorry once agin Sweet Treats can't finishher review she is in room but has asked me to give her ur 9th chapter. She says she will be reviewing that too, so as to stay on ur goodside...or else u might kill a good character. She will continue to be faithful.
*yells from room* "I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I"M SORRY I DIDN"T REVIEW FASTER!"
| Sweet Treats 9/3/04 . chapter 9
! He sounds so small and adorable. I'm so glad u updated really fast. hehe!
And that ending bit with him kissing her and cradaling her and well...all that stuff. Made me so damb jeolous. I WANT VINCENT! (umm...get ur mind out of the gutter, I didn't mean it in that way!) LoL
Anyways. This was a great chapter. The way u explained everything and put it mostly in her POV was awsome.
I can't wait for the next cgapter. And don't worry about getting inside his head. There's NO WAY u could possible mess anything up. Ur to good a writter (aww...wasn't that sweet!) LoL I'm to nice for my own good haha.
Ok well I'll let u go and UPDATE NOW! (even if u did just update today...but 2 times in one day is alright...right?)
| Sweet Treats 9/3/04 . chapter 8
Oh my giddy god. He's been playing her. That sick basterd. haha...but I still huv him. I also feel bad for him, cause I know he likes her and she totally hates him know. Aww..poor wittle sucker.
Anyways. HE SHOT AT HER! WOW, WASN'T EXPECTING THAT! Oh well. A man with a gun is sexy.
I loved how he totally spazed out on her though. It was awsome. Musta been lotza motza fun to write. hahahahaha...great job once more, and once agin u amazed me with ur updating abilities. Goes to show u have absolutely no life...
JUST KIDDING! lol
Keep updating and I'll keep reviewing. hehe *wink*
Luv ya girl
| Sweet Treats 9/3/04 . chapter 7
Yah I'm feeling lotz better now! And I'm glad my comment bout the ending of the movie made ya feel good. By the way...
I'M SO SUPER SORRY BOUT NOW REVIEVING! I'VE JUST BEEN REALLY BUISY WITH SCHOOL SHOPPING!
Am I a bad reviewer? *sob* pwety pweez don't be made. LoL
Anyways. This chappy was goody good good. I love that u said stuff bout his past an orphanage and stuff. It was cool. Made ya feel bad for the little fellow (haha...little fellow?) And I really like Claudia. She's one kick ass gal. A total biotch cha cha. LoL
Anyways...I best be reading the next couple chappies now. Good job.
Luv ya girl
| Sargonne 9/3/04 . chapter 9
Hmm...interesting chapter. Of all that's happened, I predict you putting this chapter in simply because I think things are going to get worse, that was sweet that he bought her a puppy.
| cerebralgoddess21 9/2/04 . chapter 8
Wow, I love your story. It's on my favorites. *hehe* Tom Cruise as Vincent...*Purr, rowl* I like Victoria, I'm hopin for more Vincent/Victoria smoochage soon, it's very cute. I wish more people would write Collateral stories, it definitely strikes my interest!