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Amberanime
2008-09-03 . chapter 2
I do have an acount Im just to lazy to log in

I like this fic its original and fun
the nicknames are great
at my place we call bryan snow white becouse of his pale skinn
and tala is puppy (for all the kittin naming he does in fanfics against rei lol)
kai is either captain stoic paint face ore Mr to sexy to talk (as in a negative way we love him but cant help but make fun of him)
ian is called a Imp with us as well
spencer is called huggle bear (lame I know yours is better)

anyway great fic please dont stop at chapter 3
ViVien
2008-07-24 . chapter 3
oh I like where this is going plus I bet Brian likes Rei but I really want to see how Ray and the others "track" down Tala. Please update!
PatrioticPuppy
2007-05-04 . chapter 3
lol Omg...Kai's a PARROT! XD haha, the wedding thing was pretty funny. *Laughing* Poor Rei...how WILL he get out of that? o.O

Eh, whatever. I see that you haven't updated in a long time. I won't ask for an update, though if you ever regain inspiration, please note that I shall be waiting! :D

-Puppy
Neko Kirana
2007-01-07 . chapter 3
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! this story can do so much and I REALLY want to read more about it! UPDAT UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Love-Lies-Bleeding.
2006-08-13 . chapter 3
You have to update sooner.You really do.I read this story like...six months to a year ago and it was only 3 chapters.*nods* It's awsome so far,but please UPDATE!
no1
2006-02-14 . chapter 1
hey gr8 fic plz update dis is reali gd i reali wanna now wats happenin. i'll be waitin 4 ur update fanks n keep up de gud wrk
Butterfly Ishida
2005-09-29 . chapter 3
more! more!! if you have 12 chpts why did you stop at three? Hee, I love it. Kai = parrot? priceless.
Jenna
2005-08-05 . chapter 3
Great story so far!
Are Ian and Kevin going to get together?? Cause I could see it happening..

PLEASE.PLEASE.PLEASE IF THERE IS ANY CHANCE OF A BRYAN/REI HAPPENING PLEASE WRITE IT!
DON'T LEAVE REI WITH MARIAH AND HER DELUIONS!

The nicknames Kev gave the D boys were LOL material!
...Sadist...*giggles*...LIttle John...*chuckles*..IMP!!*laughs*...

Who's Bryan callin primative!?!?!?!*mutters angerliy*
I love how you kept all the characters in,well, character... It's great so far!!KEEP IT UP!
tntiggris
2005-07-27 . chapter 3
haha fun nicknames.. OMG i luv ur stories and i almost totally forgot about u and ur fics ah but hey it's still good
ciao
~*~T of TNT
Bluestray
2005-07-25 . chapter 3
Plz update!
FireanIce
2005-07-25 . chapter 3
OMG this was mad funny lol gosh u must update soon.
darksaphire
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
lol. hilarious despite the circumstances
Curtis Zidane Ziraa
2005-06-20 . chapter 3
Go Russia! Maybe they can run into a wild animal in the mountain and the Demo boys can gain a little respect when they see the Tigers deal with the situation? Very nice fic.
Ice-wolf-16
2005-06-19 . chapter 3
maybe kai should be chicken
This is How I Disappear
2005-06-19 . chapter 3
hey, awesome fic, update soon!
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