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| dferveiro 2006-09-19 ch 5,  | abuseI'm really enjoying this story. I've just rediscovered '24' and with it, fan fiction. This is a fun story, and I like the romance and action. I'll read more later! Thanks! |
| Pineapple1 2004-10-07 ch 46, | abuseI really enjoyed this fic... It was nicely paced and laid out plus you handled Jack's characterization very well. I really enjoyed your creation of Sam and Temple (so sweet!) and I think your overall plot was good fun to read. Nifty. Anyways looking forward to the sequel. Fantastic fic! ;-) |
| stacey james 2004-09-30 ch 46, anon. | abuseloved it - thank u |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-29 ch 44, | abuseExcellent updates, although I'm definitely looking forward to the concluding two! Gotta love Temple, he's just a sweetie really, lol! Hope to see more soon! |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-27 ch 42, | abuseAww...excellent little conclusion, wonder how long it will last? Cause y'know with a 24 fic anything could happen; Salazar could escape, everyone could die... I'm rambling aren't I? Lol! Anyway I'm glad Jack and Sam managed to survive and lol at Temple! He's great. Hope you update soon! |
| stacey james 2004-09-26 ch 42, anon. | abusegreat stuff again |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-26 ch 41, | abuseBrilliant few chapters! Sorry it took so long to review. Anyways love what's happening so far, hope Jack will manage to get Sam back and stay in one piece himself - lol! Update soon! |
| stacey james 2004-09-26 ch 41, anon. | abuseah this is getting so suspenseful - update soon - pllease |
| stacey james 2004-09-24 ch 39, anon. | abuseOh quick quick update - it's getting really exciting again |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-22 ch 38, | abuseAww... Great couple of chapters, I'm glad Jack has come to his senses although I think the bathroom scene spoke for itself there, lol! Why do I get the feeling that something bad is about to happen...? Can't wait for more! |
| staceyjames 2004-09-20 ch 37, anon. | abuseWell - I can certainly understand her offering Jack a place beside her in bed! |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-20 ch 36, | abuseGreat chapter! I really liked the moment between Sam and Chase at the end, it's nice she's getting to know him. Well fingers crossed for that 'talk', lol! I hope you update soon! |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-19 ch 35, | abuseHmm... Friction in the Bauer household. Well I hope those two come to their senses soon or you're going to have to get Temple to tape a huge sign outside saying "MEANT TO BE!" Lol! But seriously I've always thought that if Jack was to ever get involved again it should be with someone from an agency who he could talk to more. Brilliant chapter, update soon. |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-18 ch 34, | abuseLol, humourous Jack is a nice change! I look forward to the two of them living with each other - that should be interesting. Anyway I hope you update soon, I get the feeling Salazar isn't going to stay hidden for long. |
| Pineapple1 2004-09-17 ch 33, | abuseAww... happy days! She's fine and all is well, lol! Wonder how long this will last? Especially with Salazar still out there. Great couple of chapters - just one thing though "You're" actually means "You are." I don't know if it was just a typo in the last chapter but I thought I'd point it out. Aside from that - brilliant fic and I can't wait for more! |