Have any of you noticed how many characters you get to use in these reviews? You could fit an entire one-shot story in a review. Its something you might want to try so yo wont have to sign up to just to let people see your stories. I have alot of good ideas for stories that I want to try but just cant sign up and write them, so maybe ill just type a story in here and hope that someone sees it. Yes i think i am going to do that i mean ive been typing all this time and i havent even used 1/10 of my characteristics. I could totally fit a story in this. Do you think its a good idea? because i think a story in a review is an exellent idea, and if you say its a good idea and you like my stories I'll start writing alot of them and making sequals and chapters. I want to do this because I think I can write some great stories, and i want to share them with the world. if you think i should do it, what kinds of stories do you think i should do first?

Aw they can be messed up together X'))

Not too bad. I think its pretty good.
Not too much in the way of spelling, but overall its pretty good.

Oh wow o.o
That was just so..
HAWT XD

i like how they're messed up:) Continue

Messed up indeed.
I loved the plot.
I loved the shot.
I loved the characters.
:)
Incredibly and coolly messed up. :)

Okay, I've tried to get over it and everything but I just can't. I feel like there is somthing missing in this fic. I mean it looks like there is gonna e ore ut there just isn't. Could you please add a chapter or a sequel to this one? Also, when you say that her teeth clacking against his, are they kissing?

Very...interesting...
I like it though..gives me something to think about...

That story maybe said: Messed up.
But it's not!

Super! I love it!

Love,
Sarrowz

Wow, a different kind of ppg fic but a good one. Your writing really gives it a nice edge and i like how it turned out.

whoa, major issues here but i like it. in a weird way i guess..

... YES! Thank you! You are perfect you are wonderful. Thank you thank you. ::bows at your feet:: this is the best one for them... omg, no words to describe my happiness... mwhahahaha... ::cough:: Thanks again.

It is like... O_O, hope ya continue this fic.

XD! Holy crack! That's funny! Seriously! I don't know why. I hope it's supposed to be! Cuz I sure got a kick outta it XD Anyways, very good job. It's simple, but still entertaining! And very well-written too ^^ Good job and keep it up!

hey..i freaking loved it..update soon