 Eskaya 2007-08-01 . chapter 1 OMG. Learn how to use apostrophes. Please. |
 Rachel Kirk 2005-10-15 . chapter 1 sweet, plz update |
 Jen R 2004-11-18 . chapter 1 hey it's awsome story about Elizabeth is terrifed by her own nightmare and Having John Sheepard there to help her to be safe and confort her that he will protect her from wriath. And I really like to see this story into new and next chapter so well hope so I gota to go bye
Jen known for (Jennifer) |
 Falcon Horus 2004-09-28 . chapter 1Aw, so beautiful...why don't you write the prequel too, about how she got kidnapped...:D
Greetz ;) |
 phantombabe 2004-09-06 . chapter 1Very Romantic. Keep up the good work. I think it should have been a little bit longer and had more story line but it was still very good!! |
 Jennifer 2004-09-04 . chapter 1 hey good story that John Sheppard conforts Dr.Weir and stayed with her through night also I'd like to read more of this chapter guys, Keep up writing good this stuff.
Smile
Jenn |
 unknown 2004-08-30 . chapter 1 hey thought was great! your doing a great job!! :) |
 Anna M. 2004-08-30 . chapter 1 So sweet. It was a nice moment. Just a note, you need someone to double check your grammar. Still, the story is very warm and nice. |
 lady rosebit 2004-08-27 . chapter 1oh, that's so sweet. You should continue. Tell the story of how she was kidnapped and what happened. |
 Lorrie 2004-08-27 . chapter 1 I really like the John / Elizabeth shipper side. Can't wait for more!
Lorrie |
 Quezacolt 2004-08-27 . chapter 1OH MY GOD! That was brilliant! Sheppard is so compassionate! You a genious! Keep up the excellent writing! |