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warrior of worlds
2008-07-10
ch 14,
abuseaww is such a cute story! good job but is it really the end?
Rainbow Queen
2008-04-25
ch 2,
abusepft. Is the flash wally west or barry? I'm confused. Never the less, very good.
Anime Queen
Soldier Heart
2007-10-24
ch 14,
abuseOne Word.
SEQUAL! Please? with chocolate on top PLEASE!!
cassidy09
2007-04-21
ch 14,
abusehey write more or write a sequl its really good.
alwaysahappyending
2007-04-17
ch 14,
abuseneon rose,
You have a great writing style..I hope you write a sequel or an epilogue, as even though this ending is nearly perfect, there is still a lot more stuff to write about. Anyway, on the whole, AWESOME STORY! :-)
Peter. (alwaysahappyending)
balletangel19
2007-04-16
ch 14,
abuseAh oh! A speeding "couple"! Flash really did find the right person.
Silverian Rose
2007-04-10
ch 14,
abuseoh man, that was so awesome! i hope you update soon!!

i'm just so glad that you started writing more of the story and even after all this time, i was totally excited to read the new chapters! keep up the good work!!
Element Girls
2007-04-09
ch 14,
abusehaha for some reason I can picture Batman playing match maker lol
El’s dress sound’s really pretty!
And the way Flash acted at the end
“I love her, I really really do, she doesn’t really hate me. If I have to spend the rest of my life wooing her I will. I’m in LOVE!”
Ahah that was great!
Element Girls
2007-04-09
ch 13,
abuseAw poor girl! Her perfect night ended pretty badly
-Liz
Silverian Rose
2007-04-08
ch 13,
abusei hope you update soon!!
Rachel
2007-04-07
ch 13, anon.
abuseHey i really like ur flash fan fic story, email me when the next chapter comes up plz
thanks
Element Girls
2007-03-29
ch 12,
abuseWell did batman ever wonder WHY flash was breaking down... MAYBE it's because of El
oh well we still love you Bats
Element Girls
2007-03-29
ch 11,
abuseWow I really missed this fanfic! Glad to have two chapters to read :D
Anyway man this was dramatic! You have me on the edge of my seat for the entire chapter 10
Silverian Rose
2007-03-29
ch 12,
abusei'm so happy that you finally updated.. chapter 11 didnt work, sigh! but really, i hope they can finally be together!! hope you update soon!!
feartoxin
2006-07-23
ch 8,
abuseUPDATE!
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