Wow that is actually pretty good. But your Tarot cards are messed up, the tower does not sybolize death. The fool does not sybolize betrayel of a child it could symbolize the innonece of the child. the wheel of fortune you got right though. Oh here is a good site for meanings:
You gave me a good ideal for a story.

i like the story
but update soon

really, really disturbing.

I love it.

-shudders- ...My God, how did you DO that? That's the freakiest story ever!!

I LOVED IT! ^_^

Kat-chan

That was amazingly written. One of the best horrors I've read and I've read alot. I really enjoyed reading it.

That was...interesting! Nice!!

wow, you're really into the dark stuff now, aren't you? go evil/yami bakura!

This was amazingly written, and a very odd view for Bakura. All Hallows' Even might be a pain for him, but as Tigress once suggested...Samhain would be better. Anyhow, thanks.

^^;; I was looking for fics for the (possible) horror community (still don't know what to call it... -_-;), came across with a summary like this: "the Spirit of Ring finds...well, what might possibly be his idea of a treat" and started to wonder why it sounds so familiar. Now, who's the author? ...oops.

Then I realized I still haven't reviewed this. ^^;;

Anyway. That was _good_. You shouldn't have worried about this fic, it turned out just great. I think you kept Bakura IC enough, I didn't have any problems with his motive or anything. ^^

(I noticed a couple of typos...
"It's the Fool," he told announced, to no one.
and
"A little girl look shyly" - that should be 'looked', right?)

This was really good. ^__^

wow... i'm speechless... i haven't read a story that good in a LONG time...

O_O

Does the Flaed's talent ever end? fantastic job. i don't think i've ever read a horror fic by you... correct me if i'm wrong... if i am i'll go bonk myself into the dirt...

the ending was cool. the two Thomas' kinda confused me at first, but i got it at the end. I like how you made it where I gotta read the whole thing in order to understand the whole story. you should do more horror fics. I'd definitely read them.

i just gotta say one thing, (==) this lady is morbid... (TT) how could she DO such a thing!! *CRIES*

This story is SO well-done! I positively adore your Yami no Bakura. Nice and creepy. You need to write more creepy Yami no Bakura fics XD

That was interesting and random ^-^ I liked it.

THAT WAS GOOD! THAT WAS SO GOOD!

That was so well written, I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT!

I am so sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stuff lately! (Hey, starting in boarding school is hard work!) Right after I finish this, in fact, I have to go read the rest of "Simple and Clean". (I haven't read it yet...bad me bad me bad me!)

This is great! May the gods of insanity, irony, and good writing bless your work forever!

(Oh yeah, and the dragon spirits, too. It never hurts to have a dragon spirit on your side.)

~Flaming Tigress Mage ^__^