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Reviews for: Once Upon a Time
Augurey Song
2005-02-02 . chapter 1
Omigosh...so sad. :(
--A.S.
MissLaughAlot
2004-11-29 . chapter 1
That was such a cute story! I loved it!
Lily
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
How sweet It was going to make me cry!
All I could say.
Ashes
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
Adorable story... just love it!
CnK
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
Aw, so sweet. Beautiful. Excellent job.
aranel
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
First reviewer for this story! w00t.

It's a unique perspective, James narrating it to Harry instead of the more common set-in-Hogwarts ones.

Some die-hard fans may say that your portrayal of James as becoming a lot more modest and quiet and thoughtful seems too OOC (I myself prefer the wacky prank-playing girl-teasing but with a thoughtful side James :P) but it's kind of sweet. :)

Love this bit: “Look, there’s a flying hippogriff outside your window!
allie
2004-08-28 . chapter 1
aw thtas really sweet!
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