good job if this is your first time, nice tiwst ending.

This had me laughing so hard... I love the way you can see the similarities in their personalities, even though they are so different. This is absolutley amazing. The only little thing I had with it was how easily Clarice admitted she loved him. She probably might have had a little more difficulty comming to terms with her self, and probably deniedit the whole time.

But on the whole, It was great.

I could see this conversation going on in my head. You're very skilled. I enjoyed reading this.

This was rather nice, except that in one instance you mis-punctuated it (when talking about tracing Lecter's location) and made it sound as if Starling were accusing HIM of being the holy virgin.

I like dialogue pieces; if the writing is clear, the characterizations are easily understood. Except for that one thing I mentioned, this was quite good.

It was indeed a cute story.
Loved the dialog. I like the way you write.

That's pretty cute! I like it!

I absolutely loved this piece!...You had so many wonderful lines here they are too many to quote.
This was well writen, carefuly planned, and just lovely.
Thanks

Clariz

I loved this. I hope you write something else soon!

You did a really good job with the dialog! There were a lot of great lines there: love the "sticky fumbling" part, "Masochism in not something I regularly indulge in" was a great way for Lecter to state his feelings, "No, I am rather high maintenance" was a real laugh and so true, and enjoyed the "Never in a thousand years, hm?" and what followed afterward. The ending was very well done also. *Noticed the mention of your muse at the beginning. Hope that appeases her enough to prevent her from going on strike!*