hi...


first. i apologise for the english... i don´t talk, or write in it...

i really like if you can continue this historie, please...

is very, very exiting...



bye... (i past for here and i have to wake up to 7 am... are the 12 am...)

Still loving it! I really hoped you haven't abandoned this story! D: It's so good!

I LOVE this story and it's sad to see that you haven't updated in a while. Please update soon! ^_^

I just read what you have of this story so far, and I think its really interesting. But why does Van hate Hitomi so...O I CANT WAIT TO READ ABOUT VAN AND HITOMI'S MEETING! WILL IT BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?! I HOPE SO! HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

ALLEN IS DELICIOUSLY EVIL,HITOMI IS OCC, AND VANNY IS STILL VANNY,PLEASE UPDATE XOXO ONE-WINGED-ANGEL

this is so great!! did you base it on Gladiator? a totaly brillant film, it goes perfectly with escaflowne.
it;s real well written and i am realy enjoing this fic, please please yodate soon!

very good story! I like the plot and I'm really curious what'll happen next. Poor Hitomi and all women who have any contact with new Ziabach's Emperor - I suppose Alan has to be that kind of bastard.. But I hope Van'll show him where is his place;)

Another great chapter! And I just love Dilandau/Selena pairings! And Van/Hitomi! I can't wait until they meet again! Can't wait for another chapter!

--Tevrah^_^

Good chapter. Are you going to continue? Hope so another book or chapter perhaps? Keep up the great work. I like the gladator type stories. Keep it up update again soon.

Nice chapter please continue.

:( im sitting here...trying to click for chapter 5...and it's not coming up! :(:( i guess ill have to try again tomorrow...

meanwhile...fantastic fic! please continue!

~fireangel

Very interesting story! I like how you've done this, it reminds me of ancient Rome! Please, keep writing!

This is pretty good! Why does Van hate Hitomi so much, I wonder? And I really really dislike Allen!! He is so horrible!! But you know, Allen's character can be cast as a good guy or a bad guy, and it'll still end up making the stroy seem good!

Well, can't wait for more!

I love this story, deffinatly creative. I hope it doesn't end in a really depressing way. So why did you make Allen crazy? Anyways, it is really interesting. Good luck getting more ideas for it, I am excited to read more.

i like very much! Please continue. ASAP!