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| takjimcin5 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was sad but cute. |
| Gothicragdoll 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a beautiful ending! I loved it! I thought it fit...but of course it's a kids movie so they needed a happy ending. i like this one better! |
| Vixen's Shadow 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abuseVix: Sad but still good. Un-Disney but you hopefully know that. Kat: Disney needs this kind of ending more often. Pirates is one of the few I can think of. Crys: Bittersweetness! Vixen will probably try to go injure Hopper in the after world or whatever you believe in. Vix: So what? I like Flik and Atta. I mean Atta was my favorite but still. She is going through too much in this story! Crys: Ideas are running through our head like wild animals now. So keep writing! And moving forward. |
| KhallieGurl 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseFlik is my favorite character, so, naturally, you can imagine my distress at you having him die in an alternate ending. But, I must say, it was written very well and I enjoyed reading it, even if it made me cry. Plus, it made me realize that this would be an awesome alternate ending if they all THOUGHT Flik was dead and then he randomly came back from the dead. :). You should totally write that. Or maybe I will. LOL. |
| ! 2007-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree with tcbnc06(Sorry if i misspeled that.) i hate it when people kill flik! But you did write this well so good job. |
| nmk 2007-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abusesad. why does he have to die? |
| Cel Stacker 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, heavy, but I kinda liked it. Considering the vicious lives of ants in real life, it's certainly more realistic :) |
| . 2007-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLame |
| Alex the Anachronistic 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseNice alternate ending to a Disney movie. I'd love it if they ended something like that...make things more realistic. |
| kairi's friend 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI really love this story. I was inspired by this story to write an alternate ending to another movie. This made me cry the first time I read it, and it still does a little. Keep it up! |
| Gothic-Romantic99 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseVery tragic. He really does love her that he'd die to save her and the colony. |
| Copper Hikari 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abusenice job, what more can I say? |
| EvanescentBeauty 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a wonderfully bittersweet story...probably more realistic than the real ending, but my love for this movie and its brilliant characters enticed me to read this great one-shot and enjoy it! Well done...good work. |
| Contraltissimo 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseSweet! Death all around! That's deliciously tragic. |
| no one 2006-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou need a good..kick..in the **. |