 Arlindor 2005-05-04 . chapter 1 Oh man, this was so funny! I would have laughed out-loud when I read it, except I was in the library. :) |
 Raku ozzarian princess 2005-01-14 . chapter 1 Number one line that made me crack up: "You could have told me it was a child's dare."
XD Oh my god, LMAO. I was cracking up.
Aragorn, Ranger of the north has passed the almight elven child dare. XD Hahahahahaha.
Great job, it's a cool one for laughes. |
 tychen 2004-09-04 . chapter 1 Sorry for the late review,I've been away.I do so love it when you are taken by one of your lighter muses every now and again.The whole thing was such good fun,and yet still so in keeping with the Aragorn and Legolas we know and love.Look forward to whatever you come up with next,just make it soon please. |
 Someone Reading 2004-08-30 . chapter 1And what a wonderful revenge story this was.
Poor Aragorn, it may have been an Elflings game, but he just proved himself as good as an Elf, if what Legolas says is true, that even grown those who surived the challenge look back on it proudly.
Very well done.
Looking forward to more stories.
Thanks for sharing. |
 grumpy 2004-08-30 . chapter 1 wonderful and funny story, no wonder Aragorn got stuck, the test was for elflings. Loved the part about his grumbling stomach, he needs to be feed more often. Thanks for the good laugh |
 NightShadow131 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Lol... poor Aragorn. That's great. An elflings contest... lol.
Well, can't wait for another fic! I love your fics, they're really amazing! ^^
Ja ne ^_~ |
 Fiara 2004-08-29 . chapter 1 It was a fun story. I like the way you are exploring the dynamics between Legolas and Aragorn. Aragorn is trying so hard to live up to elven standards and to prove himself! Your view offers a nice explanation of Aragorn's later abilities: it is not just his birth as the heir of Isildur that gives him his strength and abilities but also his constant struggle as a youth to compete with his elven brethren. Although he does seem to fall a little bit short in this story...loved the sweaty Aragorn squeezing through the tight tunnel and then teatering on the edge... |
 Althelas 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Hey Alinah,
I loved that story from the beginning.
And yes you are right the elf does not sound like a girl. *LOL*
San was wrong with that. *pouts*
It was different from your other stories, but you are great with comedies, so try another one. ;-)
Claudia |
 Ashariel 2004-08-28 . chapter 1Hehe this was funny! Great writing, nice to find something light-hearted and fun... Elf children must be so adorable :) |
 Ertia 2004-08-28 . chapter 1Whe! Another absolute delight! With enough dannger and toil to keep even us fans of your darker fics happy!
lol I loved the lembas bread in Legolas' pocket! Still giggling madly about that. :) |
 Deana 2004-08-28 . chapter 1ROTFL oh that was so cool! Ow, poor Legolas' head, lol! Great little story, I loved it! :) |