I know I should be doing something more productive with my Saturday but I'm having too much fun reading your filler stories to care. The interplay between the characters in this was perfect.

Pretty good!_

i loved the line about how Koenma seemed to assume that Kurama-kun would return "tamely" after his mother died. and Hiei-sama immediate refusal of Koenma's "offer" was completely in character. it was just, Koenma asks and Hiei-sama's attitude is basically "screw-you-i-don't-care-you're-boring-me." but then again, i've always loved that about him. *squeals* Go Hiei-sama.

...by any chance, are you going to write something about Hiei-sama? cuz if you are, i will officially become your fangirl.

Very nice.

I'm impressed. That was one of the most in-character fics I've read in a while. I particularly appreciate how well Kurama and Koenma were done.

Yap , definitely no a pawn – it’s one of the most in- character stories I’ve read

Rock on !

Sulky Hiei, so cute!

Hmm... Go Kurama? It's cool that he got in trouble, and Koenma puts him in charge, kinda. That's so great. I didn't see many errors, if any. I love fics that are easy to read, with clear spelling and everything. Awesome job with that.

Also a great story. If I was registered here all your fics would be on my favorites list. Your stories are very well written, I forgot to mention that in my other reviews. My favorite pairing is Hiei/Kurama, although alot of people that have reviewed you are Yusuke/Kurama fans. I don't think you should put any fandom pairings in here. Your stories are in character, and if you put a fandom pairing, than you might lose SOME of your readers. I will always read your writting, but I was just giving you a suggestion. Again, this story was great, like all your other stories.

Sincerely Mea _

Very cleverly done. I especially like the way you handled Koenma-he's one of my favorites, you see, and it's annoying as all there is to see him as nothing but a spoiled brat with a penchant for attracting stupid jokes about his child status.

I especially loved the line about waiting until death to torture you-just what I'd expect of a comfortable Koenma, after that stunt with Keiko's hair... Wonderful already!

Lovely! Hope there will be more soon!

YEAH! you never fail to please me with your GREAT fics... so far I haven't beem dissapointed... YYH and HxH seems to be your area of expertise well and that's ok with me cause those are my favorite animes... are you a shounen ai writer? Just curious... cause Yusuke's been giving off vibes to Kurama and that sort... I wonder if you'll make a fic wherein they're in the Makai already with Yusuke and Kuwabara. entirely YOUR descision but I'll be sure to read in those stuffy-stuff (er... ignore the lasy-last wordsy-words... I'm feeling weirdy-weird today)

Interesting. Like always, I wonder if this really didn't happen in the story. I'm sure that the author would have come up with something like this if he had given it any thought at all, considering how the characters turned out. Kurama is very in character. Polite, and we don't know much of what he was thinking. I think it was in Koenma's P.O.V. Hiei seemed just to have the right amount of anger, and that little show of guilt seemed surprisingly in character. It would explain why Hiei didn't try to come after Kurama.