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burgundy eyes
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
"I wish she was my little sister,"
"Okay. She can be your little sister." And then he gave his new friend a hard, even look. "But just that," he said.

that was my favorite part.
i like how you described the two of them as just friends, but close friends that understand each other whithout words.
i also found the part when yukito felt lonely very true.

no need for me to check the favorite author box. it was already done :)
Ranuel
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Aww, that was sweet. I particularly like the way Yuki "remembers" things as needed. I really need a slice of cake right now.
victoria85
2008-12-04 . chapter 1
this was really fun to read, and you're right, there are not to many stories about this guys as simple friends!
Aura-ryo-chimera
2008-12-02 . chapter 1
Oh, this one is so cute, and I like the non yaoi in this one! Meep!
Spidey meets Wizard-Theif
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
That was sweet. Awesome job!
-WT
beaner93
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
Poor Yuki, I never thought about how lonely he'd be in that house all by himself. t~t But at least he has the Kinomotos (Mostly Touya!) to help him out with that!
Mistress DragonFlame
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Why would I check the favorite Author's box when I merely enjoyed one of your stories? To be under the Favorite author's section, I have to enjoy your writing /style/, not just a single story. There's only one person there, and she will remain the only one for a long time coming.

But, yes, I did enjoy this story. I like how Yukito wanted Sakura as his sister.
Jay1
2006-06-04 . chapter 1
cute fic I really enjoyed it.:)
Sayoko Bizen
2006-05-06 . chapter 1
Brilliant! Yukito and Touya's friendship are shown to be strong, even without the fluff!

Good job, man! Keep writing!
Crazy Sardines
2006-03-22 . chapter 1
Very well written. :)
Random Reader
2005-10-27 . chapter 1
It is very refreshing to see those two as friends just having fun, also this seemed to be just the right size.

thank you :]
sheerWonder
2005-10-11 . chapter 1
aww... excellent story! i love the intereaction between yuki and sakura, and yuki and touya; it seems so real!
Gone-for-lunch
2005-03-27 . chapter 1
Wai! Finally, a fic that is about the friendship between Yukito and Touya! I haven't found one for what seemed like forever! Great ficcy, sweet and warm.
Setg'-in
2004-11-24 . chapter 1
hey hey that was awsome bye
Mischa Kitsune
2004-11-18 . chapter 1
Ka~wai! ^_^ I really liked this story. It does get boring to constantly read romance. This was a very sweet, introspective piece. I liked the way that you really captured the characters. Job well done! Jya!

MK
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