Awesome chapter you really did a great job...im just happy that you finished this cus it seems almost half the fics i read are never finished but you did good with this one awesome job...brolly sucks

Is that the end? What happens next?

more

*LOL* Oh I just the last bit about marriage and food

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I liked it. A bit too short, but it was kewl. .

This was a great fanfic! G/V all da way! Count this as three reviews, because MintMAC and Juu-Chan told me to say that they love it too! Write more G/V soon!

wow...i love this story...continue, continue please!

Cool! This is a good one! Is this the end? Because it couled be, but there's also plenty of room left for more chapters. And I had a question... you seemed to skip a chapt between Part 4 and Rescue! and I was wondering about that... if it was supposed to be that way (prehaps to keep it PG rated) or if he chapter just wasn't uploaded properly. Okay! I really liked this one!

toodles,

Meredith

kinda confusing POV's like who's talking. it should have been separated or sumthin' but great story so far nonetheless

Awesome fic so unexpected by the Brolly part! I'm loving it so far keep up the great work!

YAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!best v/g ficcie ive seen so far!*deep breath* !HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

cute! Awesome chapter! can't wait for more!

Leave it to Goku to bring up food...

That was oh so cute! Goku makes me wonder how bad he really did hurt himself when he hit his head on that rock...