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| Ltldogduff 2007-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow, tearjerker, man! Detail was vivid and plentiful, the symbolism in each action immense... Masterpiece! -Ali |
| Tochelle4ever! 2007-02-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseCarrie is such an evil B*CH! lol very very sad, but very good! :) |
| Semmett 2004-09-01 ch 2, | abuseWOW this is amazing. lots of angst but u got the characters really good. Please continue this is definitly one of the better stories |
| midgewood58 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseAlthough I conceed this fic is very well-written, it's an incomplete story. You haven't answered a very important question: *Why* was Michelle shot? God Bless, Midge |
| kokiri fairy 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abusei love reading your fics and this one was no exception. a wonderful dark fic. you bring out the emotions really well. good job |
| Melissa 2004-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know why I make myself read your stories when I know they will just end up making me cry. :) Beyond sad, but great writing. |
| Bluenose 2004-08-29 ch 1, | abuseVery good, but man, that was black. Very very good, indeed. You do have a flair for wringing emotion from the reader. I want to read some more from you. |