That was fantastic. Metaphorical and morbid and depressing, and so well done. Terrific work.

Aw ^3^ Thats cure! It's a bit angasty, but then it's a happy ending ^^ I think this writing style is amazing and I love this little one-shot ^^

Short, sweet and to the point. All in all, a good ficlet. Keep up the good writing! ^/_\^

No, I think it's fine like that and well my twisted part strongly recommends you to write somehing DAMN HENTAI!

wow, really wow, that was angsty.. (But not M rated, why not?!) Anyway I really like desparate Sasuke and I'm thankfull to you for writing such a nice fic, you knowi, someone has to cause more pain to that ignorant b*d! Well done!

Aw.
Yay slash!!

It's great! First it's humorous and then kinda sad... ::tear:: ::sniffle:: and then it's fluffy! Yay fluff! Your fluff good! ::grabs Slyvan:: Well he's not that fluffy, but you get the point. Yay!
~Miyabewa
PS I'm not a dragon theif!

I'm almost crying...really *very* well written. Really touching. I can just picture Naruto thinking this...

Sad and lovely and sweet ... I wish Naruto could finally be happy with someone, whether it's Sasuke or someone else... and the current manga chapters suggest the latter. Even though I've grown to hate Sasuke, I do hear the desperation in Naruto's voice throughout this fic... and I think that it's actually quite realistic with the canon... Naruto does want to be acknowledged by the one person who seems to hate him the most. *sigh*. I wish Kishimoto would make those two live happily ever after, but then it wouldn't be nearly as interesting.

Good fic.

;_; This is such a beautiful one-shot!! Combined with the music I'm listening to right now, I nearly cried. I love your writing!!

Aw
Lurve it!