nice, so K.V. died?

hiya please please could you find it in your heart to update this fic! if you want help im totally willing to help! please update love sarah x

hey there, please could u update soon! please do! this is great! you should b a pro writer!
we want more b/v we want more b/v :-)
hehehehe
happy xmas!

go on.

Very good so far, I hope you keep up the good work.

Well I like your story very muchly. Please keep writing, don't stop until you at least get past a romantic moment with Vegeta and Bulma. ^-^

lol. i like the flamers coment. it's all good about taking so long; happends all the time. though i do hope ya continue the story, because it does sound intresting so far.

Oh no what is going to happen. You gotta up date soon.

Ha, Vegeta gets spat on! Well it's true and he'll have to face it someday.

Neat. ^^ Again, it's been awhile, but this is still good! I love how you're playing with Vegeta's emotions there... Great job!

very interesting story

it's me again. personally it hink i know whos's behind the door and king vegetas so dead. can't wait for that chapter. not really a fan of the king so it should be fun. inother words please update soon. bye's for now

OK Awesome story but i ask you one request for chapter 11 can you please put more romance with Bulma and Vegeta.

Wow, it's been so long. Very good.

IM SICK OF THIS DAMN ROMANCE **! IT HAS TO BE IN EVERY STORY!! IT MAKES THE STORY **!
ITS NOT ORGINIAL ALMOST IN EVERY ** STORY.. THE ONES THAT DONT HAVE IT ARE DAMN GOOD! HEAR THAT WORLD STOP WITH YOUR DAMN ROMANCE **! ITS ACTION/ADVENTURE NOT ROMANCE POST IN THE DAMN ROMANCE SECTON