nice! you should really continue!maybe, a few years later, after an accident, when she awakes in the morgue, compleatly confused and no one to call, she remembers that number he gave her...just an idea!!

Good beginning but make her a little older as it goes along. At least in Collage. Keep up the good work and I am l looking forward to more of the story line.
Margie

More, pleasse! Sydney Ryan IS the perfect girl for Methos/Adam... Keep writing, please!

This is very cool, will sydney become involved
with "Adam" maybe ?

Not bad. I look forward to reading the next installment and learning more about Sydney.

I enjoyed it. The definite attraction is well written. I do have a problem with Sydney's age as Methos' love interest but hopefully that will change, and she will age before true feelings are shown. If the story goes that way.

It somewhat reminded me of the film production "Ever After".

Good luck with series and hope to see more.

OH! I want more! Keep up the good work. I sometimes beta work while reading, and I found only one or two mistakes in yours. Great work.

Christina

please continue this serie. icant wait to read about sidney becoming imortal and methos role in it. update soon, cause u got yourself a fan.

I like it so far, I'm a shameless Methos groupie so I love stories involving him and an OC. Hopefully another story involving these two will come out soon ^_~

Well... I liked parts of your story.

As a whole please do consider... 17 year old isn't getting into Joe's bar unless she dresses slutty or has enough make up to look older.

I sort of got a "Joan of Arcadia" feel, and you might want to put your original character in high school with the others from that show... it might add some mystery and angst.

Best with with your future writing.

looks really good...I love Stories that have Methos in them.. I hope she becomes his student..and much more...