 Flame05 2009-02-18 . chapter 3I read your fic and I love it.
I'm ok with oc's and I like some. But I cant stand when people make them Mary-sue |
 Vullinia 2008-01-22 . chapter 3very funny with lots of slashy goodness |
 trueblood 2007-08-13 . chapter 3This completely made my day. I love the Sirius/Remus one, but I always love Siri and HIS Moony. Anyways thanks so much for posting this. It's adorable and I hope you continue. |
 The Plot Bunny Whisperer 2007-02-19 . chapter 1Er... o.O"
Is Vega a boy or a girl? Half the time s/he is male, the rest female... So, er. Yeah.
::bashes Mary-Sue with a hammer::
--Banii-chan |
 Atrum Vista 2007-02-18 . chapter 3 I love Draco/Harry. |
 Anon 2006-06-30 . chapter 1 I have a few suggestions:
Lucius/Anyone
Voldemort/Anyone (Bellatrix? Harry? Just some that come to mind xD)
Ron/Hermione
James/Lily |
 ocatupish 2005-08-30 . chapter 1 we! bash the Mary Sues! i love you story because i hate Mary Sues with a passion! good luck on more bashing! |
 Nosilla 2005-08-14 . chapter 2 I love this so far! WBAHAHHAA! Plz update soon. I suggest you do some non-slash pairs, too. |
 Dahlias 2005-06-01 . chapter 2personaly I would like to see Harry/Ron OR Harry/Neville with a supremley jealous MarySue or Ginny...
And if You're into fem then Hermione/Ginny
^_^'
Loved the first 2 chps by the way, lol. |
 japanese-jew 2005-06-01 . chapter 1this is actually referring to Mistake. I forgot to put this in the review, and I'd already reviewed for the other chapters. . . . (btw, nice HP quotes.. . but you forgot the one with the toilet seat.) Anyways, I like the touch with the different wand. . . and don't forget about the butterfly effect! Everything affects everything, so EVERYONE is going to have a largely different personality, (for example f&g could be opposites, and hate each other, Hermione could go to beauxbatons, and there could be an OC.) |
 trisha 2004-09-19 . chapter 1 its ok... ^_^ write more! |
 Rae and Silver 2004-09-04 . chapter 1AKIRA-SAN!
LOve the fic, write more
becasue I will be back to read it !
Ja ne! |
 stew 2004-08-30 . chapter 1 hmm. while i agree with your original point that mary-sues are really annoying, i think you should leave them alone. other people don't come and flame your stories becasue they're a different style. let them live in their dream world for a while. hopefully they'll develop a better writing style and eventually grow out of their phase. though, i have to ask, why are you using japanese terms, '-chan' namely if none of the characters are even in the same continent as japan? but, i know how it goes, being a fan of anime and various american things as well. kinda hard to remember which fandom you're in, almost work their way into your daily vocabulary and what-not. whatever. meh, hope i didn't come off as being a prick. |
 Aera-Chan 2004-08-30 . chapter 1aw.. harry-n-draco *squish* hehe that was amusing mary-sue bashing is fun ^^ yes very ehehe |
 Suki No Hikari 2004-08-29 . chapter 1Good, funny at a couple parts... it's a nice story so far :D Good job!
One note (that made me laugh very hard in a very nice way of course): Harry-chan... err... I love my Japanese side and everything (YAH ANIME!) but some readers might be confused by that *laughs* ... unless you made them move to Japan or something and turn them into fanboys of anime... *evil plots*
Lol, well good job so far! :D See yahs! |