Great oneshot. I like the way you write.

That's...rather interesting. I'm not sure if it's entirely logical, Hermione doesn't seem much like the murdering type... I'm not sure if I can grasp the entire rain concept either.

Anyways, nice attempt.

(Personally, I think your better at writing comedy, I loved "The Chronicles of Ron."

WOW! ur story's totally insane!!has Harry gone crazy? y does his frens all seems to be in the mental hospital? wow sure r u cruel.is there other parts of this story? longbottom-- y is he here?? tell me!

Hmm . . . interesting. I liked it! Keep up the great work! 8~D

wow... this is great. 0.o disturbing slightly, but very well written. i hope you continue it. im to lazy to check if its a one shot... -.-;

oh man!malfoy died!so sad...oh well,other than tt sad part,the description area is quite gd...rather vivid...=)

oh man!malfoy died!so sad...oh well,other than tt sad part,the description area is quite gd...rather vivid...=)

Hm, I never would have guessed what was going on. That was very cool. It started off well with her thinking about the place she was in, as if it was someone on the dark side keeping her prisoner. Then, as it turns out, she was crazy. Right? She was hearing her own voice from the past in some kind of repressed memory?

Anyway, you wrote it perfectly. What am I saying, you always do. You are so great at the one-shot fics. Obviously I can't say continue this soon, but I hope you post more loveliness!

This story is cool! You could write the backstory out too, if you wanted. I wouldn't mind. *hint hint*