|Reviews for Threat Rising|
| Lethe101 8/28/06 . chapter 4
This is a great fiction although i dont see how a fall and a branch could injure Kia so much but u had to do something to see the prophecy so it isn't that big of a deal
| Madeline 12/18/04 . chapter 1
It's amazing. U really put the characters forward in the same way Chris Wooding did. 5 star!
| Rowen Artemis 12/9/04 . chapter 4
keep it coming
keep it coming
ok u can stop now
just kidding ant keep it up it's gd.
so far just try and iron out the mistakes and you'll do well
| Bob 10/4/04 . chapter 4
Apart from a bit of bad spelling i enjoyed that it was a fresh spin to broken sky and i feel it lived up to the series
| Jamman 9/12/04 . chapter 4
I think this story will be great! As long as you kee in line with the story, I'll be fine, but don't hesitate to add a few more new characters to the mix...personally, I'd like to see another anti-hero, like Whist...but darker.
| Lisa Jane 9/4/04 . chapter 3
Except for a few spelling and grammar errors, this is quite well done for a first-timer writing fan-fiction. The first chapter was slightly repititive of the final chapter of book nine, but that's alright as it leads into the story. Great story, keep it up.
| Merlin 9/3/04 . chapter 3
Pretty good first attempt. Some grammar needs work and the chapters don't come together, but I guess further chapters will start to tie in.
Good work, lets see more of it
| Matt 9/2/04 . chapter 1
nice start, i look forward 2 reading the conclusion
| triPod 9/2/04 . chapter 3
That was excellent! the best 99 cents i've ever spent! for someone's first story, that was orsm! keep up the good work