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Reviews For: Threat Rising
Lethe101 2006-08-28 . chapter 4
This is a great fiction although i dont see how a fall and a branch could injure Kia so much but u had to do something to see the prophecy so it isn't that big of a deal
Madeline 2004-12-18 . chapter 1
It's amazing. U really put the characters forward in the same way Chris Wooding did. 5 star!
Rowen Artemis 2004-12-09 . chapter 4
keep it coming
keep it coming
ok u can stop now
just kidding ant keep it up it's gd.
so far just try and iron out the mistakes and you'll do well
Bob 2004-10-04 . chapter 4
Apart from a bit of bad spelling i enjoyed that it was a fresh spin to broken sky and i feel it lived up to the series
Jamman 2004-09-12 . chapter 4
I think this story will be great! As long as you kee in line with the story, I'll be fine, but don't hesitate to add a few more new characters to the mix...personally, I'd like to see another anti-hero, like Whist...but darker.
Lisa Jane 2004-09-04 . chapter 3
Except for a few spelling and grammar errors, this is quite well done for a first-timer writing fan-fiction. The first chapter was slightly repititive of the final chapter of book nine, but that's alright as it leads into the story. Great story, keep it up.
Merlin 2004-09-03 . chapter 3
Pretty good first attempt. Some grammar needs work and the chapters don't come together, but I guess further chapters will start to tie in.
Good work, lets see more of it

Merlin
Matt 2004-09-02 . chapter 1
nice start, i look forward 2 reading the conclusion
triPod 2004-09-02 . chapter 3
That was excellent! the best 99 cents i've ever spent! for someone's first story, that was orsm! keep up the good work

10/10 :P

triPod
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