good story please update soon

lol. harry's in a bunch of **. is sevvie going to be a fatherfigure?

The story is well written, but you are in need of a beta very badly.

update soon

owh.

thats it!!

i realy enjoyed the 8 chapters that are posted.

i do hope that you plan to continue

:]

Please update soon.

Awesome Story UPDATE!

later

I would have liked to have taken the time to comment on each chapter, but I was too caught up in the story to stop. The story just keeps getting better and better each chapter, and your writing is getting better as well. my writing isnt that good (i post on dA, not here) so please dont think I am one worth listening to, but I have to say that little things are improving and it is bringing the story out even more. The discriptions you are now using, brings the reader(or at least me) into the story even more than before.
Sorry to be rambling on like this. I guess I am trying to make up for not commenting on any of the previous seven chapters. I will leave you alone now. I cant wait for the next chapter. I will be eagerly waiting.

please write more to this story thanks.

Update, update, update!

i'm still reading, keep new chappies coming please!

very interesting story. I cant wait to see how breakfast goes for poor harry. =) do you know of any other good harry gone wolf stories? if you do could you email me the links to ? thank you very much. I love your story and cant wait until the next chapter gets up!

Wow great story, I would love to read more of it soon, thank you for it.

great