 Red Handed Jane 9/2/04 . chapter 1That was a really good piece. I'm glad that I stumbled on it. Arthur seeing the situation as Lancelot being set free from the blades was a nice touch. The only bit of criticism I have is the authors note about the blade that was lost in battle coming in in the middle of a sentence. It's usually not such a good idea to take your reader away from your story to read a note from you, even if only for a second. But again great piece, as a last note I loved the way Arthur handled the blades, realising that it took great skill. |