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tigerpelt 9/29/07 . chapter 1
I am SO close to crying now...beautiful.
Kalanie 7/18/06 . chapter 1
Wow. This was a very touching piece. I like how you put this together. Keep up the good work.
Red Handed Jane 9/2/04 . chapter 1
That was a really good piece. I'm glad that I stumbled on it. Arthur seeing the situation as Lancelot being set free from the blades was a nice touch. The only bit of criticism I have is the authors note about the blade that was lost in battle coming in in the middle of a sentence. It's usually not such a good idea to take your reader away from your story to read a note from you, even if only for a second. But again great piece, as a last note I loved the way Arthur handled the blades, realising that it took great skill.
DoReMi4 8/30/04 . chapter 1
He knew he would always cherish the sound of the wind in the trees, knowing at last he would never truly be alone...

Sigh. Very nice.
YinYang demon 8/30/04 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I like how you looked into Lancelot's words and dug up a meaning in them. Keep up the good work!
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