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| Freeing Alys 2004-11-01 ch 1, | abusei liked it. nicely written. |
| Shesbeenlying 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abusehahahaaha. yes. I really don't like Craig/Ashley all that much. But that was a good 8 minutes well spent! |
| Maibe Josie 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abuseomg! i got the end and I was like...serves you right craig...ha! i loved it...beautifully written, and so emo I loved it. Wow...seriously I must see if you've written more... |
| RisingMercury 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseJamie! This is such a fantastic one-shot, I had to thank you for sharing it! Wow, the ending just caught me by surprise and left me wondering...it was great! The way a true one-shot should be. Beautifully written, and in sync with the song all throughout. I hope to see more of this from you soon! - Sam |
| rollinx3 2004-09-17 ch 1, | abusethat was nice? i'm so sad it was one shot. |
| Karen 2004-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseJamie... this was such a great FF! It was so realisitic, I felt like I was actually there as Craig. Wow! I love how you used Dashboard Confessionals lyrics in the story - the song fits the plot perfectly. You're very good at picking out songs for the right moment, hehe. Anyhow, keep writing more stories - especially about CrAsh. |
| keeponwritin 2004-09-08 ch 1, | abuseHaha. I don't know why I enjoyed this. I don't even like CrAsh that much. The ending just amused me. Keep on... writing. |
| sarah 2004-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your story!! It's a bit crazy but I really like it. You put a lot of detail into it and I had a perfect idea of what everything looked like in my head. Awesome! :) |
| lord of the snitch48 2004-09-03 ch 1, | abuseInteresting twist at the end. I thought Craig was going to stop the whole wedding and confess his love to Ashley. Oh well. |
| xxflychica88xx 2004-09-02 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is really good. You know I'm really not a big fan of the Ashley/Craig thing and I'll admit I've came across this story a couple of times and decided not to read it because I didn't like Ashley and Craig together. I only liked Manny and Craig. But after I read this...I thought it was amazing. It's pretty good regardless if I don't like Ash and Craig together. KEEP IT UP! |
| LadyKatyUltimateFan 2004-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was cute. But I didnt get the end. Hello! She just married Jimmy. Or was that like only in his head her kissing him. Anyway, that was great! |
| kacie 2004-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome ff jamie...the end was an awesome twist =] |
| pink bullets 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is your first one-shot? I was very surprised by that. You're an awesome writer and I loved this. Thumbs up for CrAsh. |
| orange crush3 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow. that was beautifully done, you made me believe in the odd sort thing that could be CrAsh. lovely. |
| Death In December 2004-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing, I really liked the end. |