it was just...so...I don't know, missing something! UG! this is gonna eat away at me all night!

i loved this but for some reason this is kinda sad, love ya
Shin-YUe

Bittersweet...liked it, though...

I think the end was a bit ... well, not enough. There was something missing, I think... Well, I don't know.
But still I liked this one. It was kindof sweet, but still so sad...

aw poor naruto, really digging your stories so far, keep it up!

Jeez ~ talk about depressing. I liked it and it was well-written but just depressing.

aw how cute cant wait till the next chaptergood work

Very beautiful. You did a great job at setting the mood. While I was reading it seemed so wrong to be listening to music, so I turned it off. :)

so kawaii. this is very very very sweet. i wonder why he isn't happy though. i'd b happy with his life lol. anyways, i wonder what will happen in the next part. i can't wait. lots of love to ya girl. ja ne.