Reviews for CASE 2: SECOND DEGREE BURN

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untitled 2007-01-25 ch 2, anon.	abusedude... didn't they give the evidence to warrick? and cath totally could have gotten away while he was chasin sara! i mean, if she knew sara was gonna get caught, no, but if she seriously thought she'd get away- plus sara never wouldve left cath like that, even if she was told to
funkyfresh4csi 2004-12-02 ch 11,	abuseAWSOME...and i LOVE hoe you did the whole friendship thing, they should be frineds it is nice to read stuff like that but it is slso nice ti have them fight
Mrs Hatake Itachi 2004-11-24 ch 11,	abuseNice story!! I like it so much!! Keep up the good work!!
Lin 2004-09-15 ch 11, anon.	abuseI like your basic idea of Sara-Catherine friendship, we need to see more of that I think, but I am a G/S shipper so I would like to see them together. But hey, everyone their own opinion right ? Well done, good story regards, Lin
Charmingly Gorgeous 2004-09-05 ch 1,	abuseAwsome story, keep updatin' lots
gnatgirl 2004-09-03 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis story seems awfully rushed to me and you need a beta (someone to proofread your story.) There are a lot of grammar and punctuation errors, which really take away from your work. I really like the plot of your story, but I think you need to slow down a lot, let the story develop over time; drawing things out makes it more suspenseful. You want to keep the reader on the edge of their seat, don't you? Show the reader what is going on, don't just tell them. Make it so it seems I am in the same room as Cath and Sara, show me what it looks like. Remember, that which is written without effort is read with out pleasure. I look forward to reading more of your writing, I hope you take some of my advice to heart. I would really love to see you improve and the only way to improve is to keep writing.
jtbwriter 2004-09-02 ch 11,	abuseThis was a great read-I really liked the dynamics between Catherine and Sara-both proved to be as strong as the other. Gris was the man being so assertive with Catherine-I'm glad Warwick took care of Sara and I have a feeling he's going to make sure she gets home okay! Thanks for a good story!
Padfoot4ever 2004-09-02 ch 11,	abuseyey! it's great! Ur a terrific(SP) wrighter! Keep it up!
Megan 2004-09-02 ch 10, anon.	abuseDon't stop there! Keep going and post another chapter soon!
Padfoot4ever 2004-09-02 ch 10,	abusegreat job great job!
jtbwriter 2004-09-01 ch 10,	abuseThis was a good bunch of updates-but that was sneaky-slipping in another cliffhanger! The relationship between Sara and Catherine in sticking together relly worked well-much better then the two of them being at odds. I love that Gil and Warrick went to save Sara and Catherine together-but what a stupid hospital to let just anyone in to see two crime victims! That said-a very good read-thanks! Okay-what next?
Space-Case7029 2004-09-01 ch 10,	abuseGood story. Look forward to more.
stlouiegal 2004-09-01 ch 8,	abuseWhat a great story. I love the storyline. I just finished reading chapters 7-8; what a suspenseful story. Just when I think I have it figured out, something else happens. I thought that the firemen had rescued cath from the fire, all of a sudden a large wood beam hits the firemen and takes down cath and the firemen. I just love the suspense and drama. Eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Laurie Beth 2004-09-01 ch 8, anon.	abuseAH! You have to post more of this soon. I so can't not wait to read the next part. This story is so very good. Please update soon. Great job:&)
CSICubbiesFan 2004-09-01 ch 6,	abuseThat was so god :) I'm so excited for the next chapters. I can help beta. I saw that u needed one. I'll be around Friday so if you send me the chapters individually-by email I will beta them and send them back to you.

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