CLIFFHANGER! The only thing worse than that is a cliffhanger for three years. Come on! Update! I want to know what happens next!

cool. lets see how saito's/fujita's split personality will be... resolved.

LOL!!

I ADORE IT... :D

I LOVE IT. :D *grins madly* I've been reading this fic for an hour and I can't stop.. I'm addicted! :) I love it! Cho is hilarious, Kenshin is perfectly characterized, Kaoru is so cute, little Eiji's cameo with Tsutomu is adorable, and Saito is wonderful as always!

haha! This is definitely awesome! I love it! :D This is one of my favorite parts: ‘"With age comes wisdom"?’ Saito repeated with a hint of a mental sneer, ‘That was the stupidest cliché I have ever heard from your mouth, Fujita! And that idiot over there actually enjoyed it! What sort of company do we keep nowadays?’

Hehe! And I love "their faces became incarnations of pristine sheets of paper." Hilarious! I love the interaction between Cho and Saito/Fujita! :D Awesome :D

I adore it! I'm so glad to see you wrote your idea in a fanfic - yay! I saw it in your doujin, but here there's even more... yippe! You are... an amazing writer.

oh..:bursts out laughing, slightly hysterically: well done!

"Cho grinned to himself. He was brilliant!"

Wat more need be said. Hysterical...

Just a little reminder, we don't know much in the way of Tokio's appearance(atleast not from this fic) which wud be a great help.

Greatwork on the simple prose on this chapter...and i'll be back soon...lol

BYE

Awesome side-splitting goodness...LMAO.

"A tiny redhead that looked more like a child than a legendary demon" Hillaious but not quite accurate, u meant "a tiny>like a little girl than a legendary demon." LOL...

I'm wondering about the time-line of the fic...

Anyway, the line that truly MADE this chapter was "Damn it, I need to kill something!"...had me in a near fit.

More soon...BYE

Insane...y no!!...ur just like me...LOL...

Actually i had the very same idea and was discussing it with a friend and turns out it was already done, and by the great A-Chan too. Cool...LOL.

I'm loving the story so far, and DID seems very possible for people exposed to so much violence. And the humor rests on the not so smooth changes from Goro to Saitou.

The scene with Tokio's hair being tended to by Saito(in any mental form) was hillarious.

"After all, there are different ways of being crazy." Cracked me up.

I'll keep at it...BYE.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! This story is killing me! Keep up the good work!!

update again soon

Oh my goodness, I'm so sorry. You're right, FHB didn't put you on the list: I'll ask her 'bout it. I feel like such a dork, another person I asked to join was also already in the comp! -_-' I really need to check who's on and who's not... That might be wise...

And thank you for reading my story, though I am disapointed you didn't review. Bad Author-chan!! ^_~ That's okay, it's good to know that people are actually reading.. I treate my hit-list like my reviews! Thank you.
~Chibi

um I'm new to your story and i wanna say that it great and cool. But you the auther already new that so all i have to say that, update please.