(lol) jajaj it was interesting, I whanted to know what where you going to write about puerto Rico since I live there and I find your story odd, especialy that a jaguar never has live in P.R only coquies and other native animals .

WHAT!THATS IT! well it was pretty good

Ahrg this is so annoying! This is GOOD! I need to know what comes next! PLEEAASE!

Hi! I'm glad to be the first reviewer! Hey.. this was pretty good! Why did u say it was bad? I liked it! The writing is incredible! I can see though that it doesn't have much to do with the original storyline... but the fact that you got anime to work with a school thing is super creative! You pulled it off excellently! Don't be so hard on yourself.. its job well done! (and hopefully a continuation is on its way!:)