It not too corny update.PLZ

more!please update soon!

Meathead strikes again! great work looking falward to more chapters

o.O
I WANNA COOKIE!!
MAKE IT A CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIE!!
A BIG ONE!!
ok, now back to what i was trying to say
(i get sidetracked really easily...there was one time when...)
ok, back to this.
are you going to continue?
i really really like this!!

love it.
u should totally put this in when dom and kel go 4 a duel
...
kel swings her sword (or glaive) just missing dom. "no offence to u guys or anything but i hope i don't have 2 kiss any of u cuz i'm not a very good kisser." says kel
"pfft... that's not wat cle...yipes!" kel swings her sword (or glaive) near neal, neal ducks behind fence, and then popps up saying "not nice lady knight not nice at all" he sniffs his nose in the air. kel grins evily.
...
u don't have 2 use it but i think it would b good.

i love your story. kinda random, but most things on fanfiction are. :)

please update soon.

lady kel

you are an evil genius...

Keep Writing (love it!),

xxTunstall Chickxx

SHUT UP! you so have to coninue this story is really good.But i say tht alot cuz i only ready really good stories..so update soon plz

~*~Flirtatious~*~

lovely contest

Very interesting... Hehe, Neal is EVIL! lol! Please Continue soon!

HAH! That's great! I noticed that you haven't exactly updated the story in a while... Well it's a really good story and I had an urge to review to it... :) I like a lot of your stories. I think you should try to continue this one, I really want to know what happens next because you mentioned that you already had an idea. If you still remember it then please try to post it! I'm really curious!

i really like this story, but it looks abondoned! plz start working on it again! i want to read the ending! :)

oh please please go on. i absolutely ADORE kel/dom fanfics, and it is essential to have neal there too. what would they be without the meddling cousin, huh?!?! hehe this is very well written and cant wait to see the outcome.

It may be an old challenge but it is one of the best. Yet another wonderful story that is very good.

wow! i hope your next update is a lot sooner then your last one. great story!