Fascinating story. Sort of fun to think of Terri and Tank as an item. Thanks for sharing and take care.

Smemationship? Just perfect ! Love the disguises and aliases. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing and take care.

WOW! Interesting twist! I loved the way things worked out between Ranger and Steph, and was surprised at the whole thing with Terri, but it really tied up the story well. Very sad situation, but in the end, the bad guy was dead and the man with the heart of a warrior had to protect his woman. Just surprising that it was Tank and that Terri would have taken the fall for him. Great story.

Maggie

The content of this is really great, and I love how you've portrayed the different characters. They all stay very true to type, and there's a good difference between them all, unlike some stories where it ends up that all of the main characters just sort of morph into a big grey blur.

Love how you've developed the plot and the characters. Your writing has improved loads, and that's clear in this story - the first few chapters aren't nearly as good as the last few. You need to work on your grammar - the whole lack of speech punctuation makes it difficult and it feels quite childish... which is a big shame because other than that, this story is brilliant and really deserves good grammar!

The latter few chapters are all in bold, which gets quite difficult to read after a while (or maybe that's just because I'm too lazy to get my glasses prescription re-checked, and I really need to...), and one of the earlier chapters has some formatting left in.

Anyway, it's a really great story, and I had lots of fun reading it :D

Such a cute story-really enjoyed it! Great interaction between Steph and Ranger. Steph and Ranger were very true to character. Lester was his usual smart ass self. Big shocker was Tank and Terry as a couple!

Liking the story so far, but I probably won't continue to read as it's to hard without the proper grammar. There are no speech marks, which is making me have to really concentrate and at 5 in the morning having to discern what is being spoken and what isn't, is just way to hard.

Other than that it was looking good.

I really enjoyed your story, AnnLynn. You should mark it 'complete.' I almost didn't read it since it's a few years old and I though still in limbo. Thanks for sharing your gift.

I love this story. I find myself comming back to it over and over again. I thought I'd let you know that there are some formatting errors in chapter 5 that make it hard to read.

Great story! My favorite part is when they get in the car and Steph yells, "To the Batcave!" If she ever gets to see the Batcave (and I really REALLY hope she does!) that would be exactly what I'd want her to say before hand. :)

I enjoyed this, just two things. Did you rework this story? Its very familiar but its seems different, more streamlined maybe? And just so you know reading a story without any captions when the characters talk is a little difficult, especially with Steph because its difficult to figure out what was out-loud or in her head. Thanks

Great Story. Loved Ranger's last line.

I almost fell out of my chair at the visual of Ranger in tie dye and bell bottoms.

Lester is always fun.

We all knpw that is Ranger's favorite part.

I like the nice easy light flow. Very reminiscent of JE.