this is amazing! loved it! i wish she had the ancient gene .. ;x;x. the part with elizbeth flying the jumper too fast was brilliant! great fic.

i thought i should mention this but no there is no zpms they are running small areas of the city on naquadah reactors five of them to be precise on amore positive note i like this story

Very,very good. I would love for you to write a sequal, especially now that Simon is out of the way.

I really love this, but then again I love all your John/Liz stories. Keep them coming.

Ei happy days!

Another great story - I was on the edge of my seat for most of it.

Love how you write John and Elizabeth, and I love how you're building up their friendship before moving onto anything else.

hey did u have seen "home"episode last week ? and when will u add more chapters about Elizabeth and John after she saved John life by using the acient chairs to control, by her own command becz she has ATA gene like John has.

Oh wow - for a second there, I really thought you were about to kil John (I almost had tears in my eyes - honest!)

Excellent writing...I look forward to more!

Ok, so I'm a little behind on my reviews. Please excuse my tardiness (blame it on the whole 'moving back to school rush'). I am really digging your whole series that you have going on here. I found this story particularly interesting because you used so much of the show as background information and explained everything so well (ie the use of Ancient technology and how they missed Elizabeth's gene the first time around). Plus, it's a well written Sheppard/Weir fic which automatically gives it two big thumbs up in my book *g*

I can see how your writing is improving as well. Just from going back and reading your first piece and then reading this one, it's really obvious how your writing skills are developing. In the words of O'Neill (or Mr. Burns if you want): "Excellent" I can't wait to see more from you. Hopefully I'll get motivated enough soon to contribute some of my own. But until then, keep writin! Peace.

i like it. so there will be a sequel?

Very nice! Loved the ending. Can't wait to see what your next story is about!

I want a farscape\staragte atlantis fic...

I want a farscape\staragte atlantis fic...

I've read all your SG:A stories and think they're great! Please continue!

On a scientific note: Atlantis is powered by somewhere between six and ten Naquada generators. But comparing Naq. gens and a ZPM is like comparing AA batteries to a nuclear power plant.

Great stories! Note that I said stories because the others were great as well. I'm sure you have more stories floating around and I can't wait to read them when you post them!