|Reviews for Spring|
| fluorescent lights 5/19/10 . chapter 1
| TaylorMyaTaylorMya 12/3/09 . chapter 1
| SecondSilk 2/27/05 . chapter 1
Sweet. And I really like your stuff.
But please use capital letters. It does seem to change the approach and feel of the story, but I think it would work even better with visibly separate sentences.