Please update, I loved the first story and I cannot wait to read more of the third. UPDATE

you should update soon!

I love it. update soon

I really love your story...it's even better? than the spray of the sea...update please))

OH! Don't discontinue this story! I love this story! I'm so happy you've updating again! Anyway, can't talk now, please don't abandon it!

Where are you? This story and Spray of the Sea are the BEST MS POTC stories I have ever read, mainly because they don't read like a Mary-Sue. PLEASE update! I was up so late last night reading that I was kicked off the computer by my dad. I really want you to finish this story so much and I hope you get over your writer's block. My guess would be that Edmund and Laura become pirates...At least one of them should. Stephen it sounds like got in trouble with the Navy and isn't their doctor anymore. He should come aboard the St. John too! It sounds like Tom is either really in love with this girl or he is just trying to use her to forget about Jack. Either Jack (I can't spell her full name) realizes that she doesn't need anyone else to make her happy or she makes Edmund/Tom/Ben/etc her partner in crime or something.

Good luck in college and I hope you update soon because I am dying to see what happens!

Luck to you: Alateriel567

YAY! You used my character! THANKS! Poor girl, I wonder what she went through in her life...I can't wait to find out! Gosh, Will shoud just grow up and be nice to Jackie (that's what I'm calling her cause I can't spell her full name..hehe). Congratulations on your stories being added to a C2 archive! You totally deserve it! Now, I'll just need you to update soon to pay me back for the wonderful character I gave you...hehe. Thanks!

Namarie,

KT

You're in college now? Whoa. Well done.

Good chapter. I always love this story. I'm still trying to place certain names, but all will become clear in time, I suppose. I hope to see more soon!

Wow. I have to admit, I went away for awhile because I was extrememly busy, but now that I have finished reading the chapters I missed... Well, wow. Please update soon! I must go back and read some of the prequel soon, to refresh myself. Keep up the good work, and good luck getting over that writer's block.

Are you going to update?

Woah...I was reading your progile. How are you 14 and going to be a freshman in college? Wow. I feel so stuiped right now! oh well. I love thios stor, when are you going to update! Lets go, come on!

Yea! An update! Writer's block is TOTALLY understandable, we all get it. But it was a good chapter, none the less. Um, I wonder who the mysterious girl is? Could it be my character I gave you all those months ago? Or another? Lol it's just so mysterious! I guess I'll have to wait until the name comes up, now won't I? Anyways, update whenever you feel ready, cause as a fellow writer, being ready might take a few weeks...or months, or whatever.

Namarie!

KT

I am so happy you updated this story! I think it's my favorite of yours. Still trying to place the name 'Benjamin'; I'd go read over SotS, but I'm lazy like that.

Update soon!

YES! you updated! this was a wonderful chapter, I really like teh doctor! update soon!

WOW! This is getting really good! I also like the girl, who ever she is! I can't wait for the next chapter! Amazing as always!TA!