You've done a great job capturing Tyr's pesonality. These sound like his motives. Good job.

A very nice look into Tyr's mind. You've caught the character perfectly. Good job! Hope to see more from you soon!

That was good.

Wonderful. You have captured Tyr's personality, way of thinking everything. more please

Man... This is written by a Niche!

You have paid attention to Tyr...and not wavered from the Niche bible one inch...

Big commendations for you... Character deveolpment without changing the character to suit you individual preferences... that is very rare from an 'andromeda' fan...

Pat yourself on the back, and then get busy! Write more... Do you think you could do justice to the other characters as well as Tyr?

Thank you for your effort!

shatora

Very good. You're an excellent writer.

Wow, we're getting to know a softer side of Tyr...Now THAT is SCARRY, eh? lol Cool. :)

A good look into the logical brain of Tyr. Believable, and well-written.