hahaha that was pretty funny.. no offence.. i laugh at everything.. oh its pretty sad as well ..picollo or however you spell it.. is always alone.. _ never knew he felt that way...

cool keep it up and i will read

;_; that was depressing...i like that couple too! dont ask about my name.i came from the inuyasha section! lol

Awww!I like!

*swallows, eyes quivering softly* wow... I don't know what to say... *sighs* Pikkoro-san IS always so alone... *blinks* For a second there I thought Pic was either just gonna snap or Gohan would when Pic kissed him... did he already know? He took that almost a little to well... *ponders, shrugs* Ever since I started getting into shonen-ai this moment in the timeline has so intruged me, when Gohan tells his sensei he's getting married, not knowing how he really feels for the child... I tried writing a version of that myself, but I don't like it anywhere near as much as I do this. *watches Pikkoro colapsed on the floor crying, feels her heart ache for him* Gohan's such a sweet innocent little child, he doesn't really have any clue what he does to that man, doesn't know that he's all Pic has in the world, all he really cares about...

Ah! That so sad! But it was good. _

I could almost feel the want and desire Piccolo wanted to offer Gohan. But sadly Piccolo couldn't offer everything Gohan wanted. It was very effective in my opinion. Love it

GAHHHH! This is so sad! Too sad! Poor Piccolo-san... *wipe tears*

Wwwaaahhh! Sniff... good... sniff... job...

Awww, poop Piccolo. How sad!

*cries* Waaaaah...my pikkoro is sad...

Hi Tomo, I thought that I would finally put a review for this story for you. It's a good story but poor poor Piccolo. If I were him I would dispose of Videl!_ I just cannot stand her. I know that Piccolo would never be that mean but maybe Gohan could finally see the light at the end of the tunnel? Who know? Maybe? Like who really does care and love him the most. Would Videl Die for Gohan? I don't think so. Well keep up the good work. NG

I LOVE YOU! Piccolo and Gohan are my fav couple on DBZ... And although that was a sad fic... :::bursts into tears::: It was Piccolo and Gohan! Kinda... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! :::bows down:::

Oh, how I weep, *sigh* write more to the After Gohan story, or more to the prequel, please? This is really good *sniffle*

Me again. Do you know that you are an incredibly vivid writer? That you manage to convey so much emotion so quickly? That I need you to write more cause I'm addicted after reading two of your pieces? Well, if you didn't before, you do now. About the story specifically, I will say Wow. Dark. And you're so good, write something happy! PWEEEZZZ?