I've just read your whole story, and I think it's brilliant! Please, update! It would be a waste to let such a good story die...

Hello. Just gone reading your story and I love it. Great creativity with the storyline while still following the timeline. I know its been a long while, but im hoping you choose to finish it. Thx

I have NEVER seen a twist like this and I love it!

I like this fic:) It's entertaining with a good storyline and it shows your writing-style, not just a story. But I would like story to move foward a little faster. sometimes the text isn't wholly clear, and when it moves slowly I tend just to skip a couple of pharagraphs.

And - of course - the lack of updates. I mean... /february/?

No, keep it up, and I'll stay:)

Lovely. And now Han thinks his father-in-law is insane.

Very good.

CT

‘Great. It looks like the fate of the galaxy depends on a flunked Jedi Knight with a teenaged Sith Lord stuck inside his head. Pity the galaxy,’ I love that line! It's hilarious!

Very good!

CT

Anakin with Multiple Personality Disorder from Vader? Not good! Not good at all!

CT

Darth Vader podracing. That I would pay to see!

Very good! Very good indeed!

CT

Just found this story through someone elses favorites list and read all 22 chapters. have to say I've enjoyed it immensely so far (the bits in the last few chapters reminds me of the Vader monlogues over on one of the star wars boards) I suppose it would have thrown off the book timelines (though those are sorta muddy themselves) but I'm surprised that Vader didn't do any teaching for Luke and Leia (or at least get asked by one of them). Other than that looking forward to whenever the next chapter gets released.

HI, i know i am new at this, but i wanted to say wonderful job so far! i love the way you have the plot line twisting in dark directions, and the thought of two seperate minds in one body, has definatly got me thinking. I am also well impressed with your knowledge of the time line and books! Brava! There is only one small thing i would suggest. Vader is a sith, I would advise you find their code of conduct and read it. thank you for your bravery.

Lady Knight Sakia

An excellent chapter. I love the Vader vs. Anakin stuff. When someone has to hold a battle for control of their own body is always amusing to me for some reason. I can't wait for number 23!

o.O Ok, I've decided that I really like this. LOVE the Anakin/Vader banter and such. They're both being such babies. *smirk* I hope to see more of this soon!

Cool!

Yeah! you came back, will you be writing more? I think it wsa a great chapter I like the Anakin/Vader relationship their like polar opposites in a lot of ways and it makes it very funny. I hope you continue.

Hello,

I like the story so far. The dual minds is interesting twist. I must admit I am less then thrilled with the dual minds. I think I understand it is Palp's doing? I liked the story enough to want to wait that part out and see what happens. When can I look foward to the next installment? :)

BINA