Awe...Poor Junior...
I wanna kiss him!
* hugs Junior*

This chapter was very pleasant to read as well ^_^ Great job!

Wow your writing skills are quite amazing! I really think I'll enjoy this story immensely as it is written so very well. Everyone's in character and I like the twist with Nergal appearing in the tv screen ^_^ Now that I've posted my first review I'm on to chapter 2!

How did Mandy manage to wake Grim up by kicking him with her shoes? Wasn't she sleeping when Nergal kidnapped her? Her shoes are called Mary Janes, by the way.

ew... but quite good. hey, how did mandy wake grim up by kicking him with her shoe? wasn't she sleeping when she got kinapped?

Aw, Mandy and Grim kissed! And was Junior going to kiss Billy? That's slightly ** if I do say so myself...I like this, it's funny. But it is a little rushed

Highly amusing, confusing, and romantically sweet. :D How fics should all be. *LOL* And why, might I ask, haven't you updated this since October?! Ah! I finished chapter 13 and went to click "next" but there was no next! Aww. I wanna see what happens! Funny how everyone was making out - even Billy and his hand. *LOL* Poor Junior. All alone.

C'mon, give us more! :D

Quite an interesting tale. The characters stay pretty much in character and the scenes and details flow well. Omoishiroi, interesting.

AH! *Runs around in circles until a paramedic puts a shot in my thigh*
Now, well. good story. I keep thinking that Nergal is a perverted sicko, no matter what you say. Good work. And if Mandy gets pregnant during the next fic you write, I'll make sure Santa gives you a kick in your...

Ok... I guess it was still cobered in ice cream then.. *grin*!

I laughed so much during this story, I guess that's the end but who knows? It was very good, very enjoyable!

Er, a bit of a random question here. Did you switch/add a chapter when I wasn't looking? 'Coz I was pretty sure that I reviewed for Ch.13, and it was different. *scratches head* OR I'm going insane, either way. I tend to do that sometimes, just go insane. x3

~Kitsy

...omgXD That was *the* funniest and most adorable thing I've read all day! I loved the slight Junior/Billy thing ye did there-that was great! Poor Junior, tho'-so left out!X3 heh I also liked the way Nergal joined in, and Aphrodite's a fun narcisistic character as well-great descriptions!=D Dude, you did a wonderful job with keeping them IC for the smooch; I never thought it could be done, but you've pleasantly surprised me here, chica =3 Very impressive! Oh and you get extra points for being original and writing this pairing with Younger Mandy in it-I've always pictured Mandy as older when this happened and I thought it'd be weird and/or disturbing if she were just a little gal XP However, you also changed my mind about this-it's actually sorta sweet^^-and for that you get a cookie!:D

*COOKIE*

Welp, time for me to motor-so long and thanks for all the fish!^^

~PG

-PS: "At that moment, the 9th dimension collapsed." NiceX3

Hey, the awkwardness again! Nergal's being a real ** to them, makes me want to smack 'em myself. But then again, that's what makes him amusing. I don't really have any suggestions for the next chapter, just do what I do and wait, it'll come to you. Always does. But then again, took me three months to get a good idea that way, so take someone else's advice o_0

~Kitsy

Oh! Oh! Oh! I have a sugestion! *Raises hands wildly* I'd like to see Grim and Mandy together!

I loved this chapter!! Everyone seems fine to me. It just stinks that they didn't kiss...

I Really hope you update soon!

WHOO! This is getting better and better. They seemed as in character as possible for a "romance" story. Please update soon. =D