Another amazing chapter. I just realized I had never read the rest of this story. Great characterazation again, of both Dairine and Roshaun. Off to read the next chapter!

i love the the way you put the backround of roshaun to the story in i mean it kind of left all us readers on the cliff of roshaun history THE SUN GOD i love that name so thats how he got his wizardry i always wondered about that

Roshaun is portrayed perfectly. i think that this is by far my most favorite chapter. the emotions of the common people are so realistic if not cliche. but what makes it unique is Roshaun's reactions. it's kinda sad though when u think about the kind of life he has, everyone hating him. GOD! now you've got me feeling sorry for him. you must be a good writer!!

so they didnt heal the sun yet? k..

Hmm..not sure wut 2 say about his chappy..its 2 short..didnt have that important event

I like it! It shows show hard it is to be fanous and important! You're a great writer, you know that? Good luck on that original novel you're writing! When it's published, tell me and I'll buy a copy!

Hey, I'd take Roshaun's place if it meant meeting the Callahans. Oh wait, nevermind. ^^ Heh, nice chapter, looking into Wellakh and everything. Nicely done! Continue.
-SAT

wow...just wow. YOu really get into the mind and point of view of the character. I can't wait to read more!

P.S.~sorry, no critisism1

~Britt

this is cool...it really gives you a look into what roshaun's life could be like. Kep writing!

Aww... Poor Roshaun. That's really his duty, that's all he'll ever do, risk his life to save his People, because nobody else can just step up and do it for him.
-Shima

Ah. That was so cute. I love storied like that. You definetly know how to play with your reader's emotions. That little kid is so adorable. It is such a great idea to go back and do a fic about Roshaun's history. ...Me encanta MUCHO!!

I've never read "The Prince", though I am vaguely familiar with Machivelli...this ought to be interesting.

I'm excited to see another fic involving Roshaun... there are only two others, and one of them is mine. He is such a neat character.

You're characterization of Roshuan this chapter is right on the mark... slightly matured and changed from the original Roshaun, but still haughty and vaguely bored with everything. I like it.

I don't have time to read the next chapter yet, but I'm looking foward to it and to more updates. Good job!

YAY! This is jolly good, I say! The Incredible seal of approval has been stamped upon this story. Please write more!

I've never read the Prince, but I like this fic thus far. Very nice. There need to be a LOT more fics like this. (Involving Roshaun, I mean. He's a very... himself, kind of character. Fan fics are PERFECT for him!) Anyway, continue soon!
-SAT

*sigh* I love D/R.. even if it is one-sided! Very well-written! It's coming along nicely! Update son!