M, killing Dylan. This is like some kind of beautiful dream. I love Beka's musical warfare against Dylan. I don't know if he really needs killing, but Beka's right on about that slap in the face! On general principle if nothing else.

Now this is a truly macabre little piece. I almost want you to write another chapter just to see who backstabs whom and who the last person standing is.

LOL!i loved this part: "One of us needs to kill Captain Hunt.

Very funny; well done you write comedy well.

Ha! That's funny... good job with the songs and theme 'n stuff!

wow. i realy like this. the songs are kickass, and the theme/plot thingy rox. i like how dylan's an ass! ;) its really great!