Reviews for The Queen's Command
xXxrouxXx 8/3/11 . chapter 1
Was this completed, it doesn't say at the top :O Anyway, LOVED IT! AMAZING!
hajimebassaidai 4/27/10 . chapter 1
A nice line in the terror of not knowing what's happening and Rodney's determination not to take anyone else out with him. John goes a bit OOC though.
rebekah78 5/3/06 . chapter 1
Excellent McKay writing! He was in character all the way and it was very amusing. Well done. I really enjoyed it.
bofh 11/2/05 . chapter 1
Wow, great story. Really dark and atmospheric. Plus you really managed to capture a lot of things about Mckays charecter.

Keep writing!
Silverthreads 9/16/05 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this.
Porthos1013 7/2/05 . chapter 1
Oh, wow, that was really creepy. I actually got goosebumps, although that might have been the air conditioning. ;) Very good, lots of angst, I really enjoyed it!
Calen 2/27/05 . chapter 1
nice ending, but they'll get it if that Wraith queen takes him over again. That'll show them, heh. :) Maybe if he finds that finger poker thing, he should poke Carson first, he'll see it's real then.

More soon!
angw 1/31/05 . chapter 1
please write a sequel...
CinnamonT 9/9/04 . chapter 1
Thanks for your story, I loved it! Excellent job on capturing McKay's character - best I've seen so far. It reads very well altho it was a little confusing changing from Wraith Queen to conference at end, but otherwise perfect. I hope you will write more! Thx.
pettygrew 9/7/04 . chapter 1
I liked your story. It did get a bit confusing near the end. And there was one small section of dialogue that was confusing who said what, but otherwise it was a good solid plot. You were bang on with Rodney's character.
Wolf Maid 9/5/04 . chapter 1
OOh! Wonderful job, although very creepy. )

Are you going to write a sequel? I love your portrayal of McKay! Excellent job! I love it!
MsDubstep 9/3/04 . chapter 1
Oh my god! it's got him again! Please update this soon so we know what happens, cause this is really good.
MattyDreamer 9/1/04 . chapter 1
GREAT! I love McKay! Please write more, lots lots more!
Xtin2000 9/1/04 . chapter 1
This was great, more than great, I loved that, and I am herewith begging you to write another part!
Hassawassa 9/1/04 . chapter 1
Holy cow!

What a most excellent story!

Even if this is a one-shot it was still incredible.

You characterized everyone so well, I mean, McKay was right on target.

Well if you continue this one, that be great, if not, it so stands well on its own. Wonderful job, can't wait to see more.
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