Quite an impressive effort this story, Your characterisation is vivid and easy to visualise. Hope the drawing is going well, and would like you to consider adding some more to this, it's very good!

Hi. Long-time fan, first-time reviewer. I love your story. It's got to be the best piece of Shaodw Raiders/War Planets fanfiction ever. Are you gonna update soon? Please? I'll use proper spelling, grammer, and use of canon if you do.

C'mon, finish it already! Don't leave us hanging.

Great story, can't wait to hear more!

please write some more. i want to know what happens. please! or i'll cry :'(

Please continue. I love the story.

keep going!

love you fanfcition as always al!