Well done. I loved this! I especially liked the way you ended it with Gir.^^

It shall have the honor of going on my very clogged up favs list. I had a very limited space now so only the best will make it on.

~PG

Greetings TilasFox, This was pretty clever. I really enjoyed seeing through the eyes of these characters. (pun intended…or not.) Well written, well done! - Ashsema

WOW! I'm sure glad my eyes read this one! It was great!

Wonderful parallel structure, very much in character all the way through.

Aw... That was cute.

That was pretty interesting. Good job!

VERY well-written. I love!

I hope you write more soon. This is goin' on my fav.s!

This is cute. Eyes are fairly symbolic throughout literature, for among other things, being a mirror to the soul. This is both well done and interesting.