This is pretty cool. That's an interesting take on the whole Quest story, since the monastery training was never mentioned too much in the game, and you've created a whole mythology for it. It's very interesting. I guess its been a while, but it would be cool if you picked this up again.

wow! I very love your story, it is nice ! ;) But, I have a question, is it like this really that her mother are dead and his is it true all the things that happened to the little kids? Sorry, because when I play this games, I was too young for understand english, and now, I try to understand.

Another excellent chapter! I knew it would be worth waiting for!(_)

Nice. Please continue.

wow, u turned a video game that i truly hated all of my childhood into a novelized masterpiece. i love you...

cool your story! I like the game quest and I like your story too!

I hope you will continue to write some story!;)

Moonlight

I liked your story it was very nice. and I wandered how you managed to add this cathegorie on the site.

Julie Percevent

Wow! This is awesome! I really hope to read more of this!

Awesome chapter. Like I said before, this story keeps on getting better.

A QUEST 64 FIC! *bows to your fic* Someone's finally done it! Thank the Gods! o!

I love this game and I LOVE your fic! Continue soon!

I am glad you finally updated. This story just keeps on getting better. I am happy to see such loyal commitment. I only wish more people could see how great the Quest game series are. I look forward to more chapters.

You are great! Greatgreatgreatgreatgreat! I beat Quest 64 too, but I cheated. I used A Gameshark.

RichardI: What is this "Gameshark" I hear talk about?

Me: Its too difficult to explain. I'd have to use computer talk.

RichardI: I can understand.

Me:101010010101101010101

RichardI: *Is sitting with mouth agape, drooling*

Me: anyway, the good god in this story sounds nothing like my god. He offers everything as a gift. you just have to be willing to accept. If you want to learn more, please email me. I would love to share his gift of eternal life with you.

By the way, something that made your fic seem even more appealing is that I was listening to Eye of the Tiger on Winamp whilst I read. The lyrics suit your tale somewhat. I will keep reading. I have been waiting forever for them to add a Quest section. siya!

Interesting. Update soon.

you told a great story and caught the spirit of the game aswell. that was awesome.

you told maybe a clasic tale...heartrendingsadness, but you played quest 64 to the end so you know what happenes next. i can almost hear that muic again.

insipiring

eh, good start. You're a brave author, to start a new section. To anybody who reads reviews of the story, the bar is raised. I wanna see somebody top it. Let the games begin.

I give this story about an 8/10