u r a good auther

oh...plz update soon! and not in a year or somthin!

kill this boy off soon
:P

i am way behind XP

RAMEN!oops,i mean...i agree w/h u. there are no jaken lovers*shudders*

kool story! its really interesting.
oh i kno the names of Kagura's attack.
its called "Dance of Blades" i kno i'm kinda late about ur error.
well n-e wayz LOVE UR STORY! =)
"MUAH"
ELISA

You're a very good writer, though you may want to spell check your stuff before you post it. Please, get the next chappie's up soon! hey are quite enjoyable.

you... kunai? geez.. cut it out with the ninja... its the SENGOKU JIDAI! = ='' well... it was overaly

U know wha? Outof all ur OCs I like Kii best. Hikari is 2 weird and I wouldn't be surprised if she died from tryin to save someone. Hakisuma is 2 nice. Good, though.

_ZounY

Nice chappy! Your writing is far way better than mine. You're a very good writer - I can really see that through all the improvements. Besides, you already surpass WL's writing skills. Just don't write too much; you might get dizzy and stressed even more. Relax a bit ~_^

Rawr, please dun try and make this into a Naruto thingy. Seriously. Damn Naruto dun gotta git inta this fic, got that? No more damn ninjutsu crap. You dun see that happening in the Anime, so once agian, please dun do it here.

Me again! You put the traslations for Jap. words at the end of the chapter or something. It's hard if you don't understand. Hikari better help Hakisuma out! Can't wait until next chap.!

Sorry! I enjoyed the chapter, but in someplaces it would be kind of choppy.^^; And well, wait...you plan on killing Hikari? ((gasp)) OO; Well, off to read next chaper!

Nii-chan...I will eventually read this ficcy of yours...when I find time...

P.S.-I've saved the ficcy to one of my floppy disks so I'll try to read it...

You ficcies are becoming more an more like television scripts... "Flash backs, (Character), blah blah blah, Blah"
Write a friggin' chapter! Not a FOX TV Drama!

It's still a good ficcy, Joyce, still a good ficcy.