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Reviews for: Time's Children
Darth 1/5/03 . chapter 1
You are right Crono does talk and I can prove it all you have to do id try all the endings and in one of them he talks and a scauled Lucca and marle
Gotan who got lotsa things to say 3/11/01 . chapter 4
OH MY GOSH! GLENN (frog) SAID *SHIT*! Glenn is out of character BIG time. your stories arn't long enough, and... isn't Crono supposed to love MARLE? Lucca's just his best friend. Oh and the gate key only opens up a gate, it can't create one. And, yes, Dalton is dead, unless he can survive a fight against your characters during the game. I haven't finished the game though (i'm at Lavos... THAT FUCKER'S STRONG)I suggest you read more advanced stories before thou decides to write... great, now i sound like Glenn... _
Inkhead 2/27/01 . chapter 4
That was pretty good..I'd kinda like to see where it goes. And it's Crono/Lucca, AND you killed Marle..._
Liete 2/16/01 . chapter 2
He married Lucca? o_O Sorry...I just sincerely believe that Crono and Marle are meant to be...nice story, anyhow. _ Liete
Christopher Good 2/10/01 . chapter 3
Very Intriguing story I must say. Please continue, as a devout Crono/Marle fan, I wasn't sure about your pairing at first; but nicely done.
Avery 2/8/01 . chapter 3
Good! I'm looking forward to future chapters. . . this promises to be a fairlyengaging, fun, and weel-plottedout story. Nice dialogue. A little constructive critism? Events sometimes pass by two fast. You might want to take some time to describe them a bit more- but, then again, I'ma detail hound, so it might be just me. Continue the good work!
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