plz dont tell me uve given up on this story. it has an awesome theme, totally original!
plz keep writing!

...eh? I think I read this over at ficwad. It was really good, especially chapter...5? You should post more.

lol...poor Irvine...stuck with...bakers...at least he got out of the hospital right? ^_^

Great job with this chapter! It's funny how you made Rinoa a little clueless (I feel so mean...) and also kind of continued on with the fic. I'm not sure where it's going but I really like it. Update soon!

With each chapter it gets better. I love the way you write Irvine. I have to admit, of the FF8 cast...he's my favorite to write. Him and Zell. *shrugs* I always like the smart asses. In any event, nice job! Can't wait to see what you're cooking up!

Great job Larathia! I really enjoy reading your stories...very well written. I originally got hooked in by your "Griever" story, and have been waiting for new ones ever since. Interesting spin on what would have happened...don't really have any suggestions to make it better either. Please update soon!

Omg...what a great idea for a fic! I haven't read anything like this in a long time. At least I think I haven't...eh.

I love the idea of 'what if's' you know? I hope Squall and the rest of them are ok. Anyway, you caught my attention with these two chapters and I hope that you update really, really soon. I so wanna know where this goes.

Oh! I love this story already. *does a happy dance* Rinoa sneaking in as a candy stripper is pure genius. And your interior work with Irvine's thougts are nicely done--especially the small bits with Ifrit.